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List awards, scholarships or special recognition you have received

List awards, scholarships or special recognition you have received LrXoR
So far, I have received a lot of awards, prizes and special recognitions from school administration, auditions and contests. For example, we recently had a math competition at our school. I was rewarded with gift for my good participation in it. I also took part in a carving competition on Navruz and won first place. Then organizers gave me flowers and certificate. Also, I had always been very interested in poems and English literature in general. Two months ago, I attended English contest and I recited the poem "Mother". In this competition I was awarded a book which is called by Harry Potter
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So
far, I have received
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a lot of
awards, prizes and special recognitions from school administration, auditions and contests.
For example
, we recently had a math competition at our school. I
was rewarded
with gift for my
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good
participation in it. I
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
took part
in a carving competition on
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Navruz
and won
first
place. Then organizers gave me flowers and certificate.
Also
, I had always been
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
interested in poems and English literature
in general
. Two months ago, I attended English contest and I recited the poem
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
Mother
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"
. In this competition I
was awarded
a book which
is called
by Harry
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Potter
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IELTS essay List awards, scholarships or special recognition you have received

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
102 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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