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Nowadays education quality is very low some people think we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their features other believe that student

Nowadays education quality is very low some people think we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their features other believe that student E31VD
It is considered by some weather pupils should judge their educator's after each course, while others argue that it would lead to poor discipline in the classroom. personally, I agree with the former point of viewAs many argue, learner should analysis their master first of all, it would help to the administration staff. if for learners will assess their Teachers then education system will improved as well as school will be able to differentiate between good and bad teachers. By differentiate they can fired out bad teachers
It
is considered
by
some
weather pupils should judge their educator's after each course, while others argue that it would lead to poor discipline in the classroom.
personally
, I
agree
with the former point of
viewAs
many
argue, learner
should analysis
their master
first of all
, it would
help
to the administration staff.
if
for learners will assess their Teachers then education system will
improved
as well
as school will be able to differentiate between
good
and
bad
teachers. By differentiate they can
fired
out
bad
teachers
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IELTS essay Nowadays education quality is very low some people think we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their features other believe that student

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