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Describe your talents, hobbies and any sports you enjoy

Describe your talents, hobbies and any sports you enjoy Kwjok
In my free time, I really like going to the basketball court, in my school. Because participation in basketball is my favourite form of sport. And this game is played by team. That is why it teaches teamwork and other issues which are applicable in real life as well. And i have always liked arts and crafts. Because I am a creative person and like doing things with my hands. And my talents are I can dance and sing be well.
In my free time, I
really
like going to the basketball court, in my school.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
participation in basketball is my
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.
favourite
form of sport. And this game
is played
by team.
That is
why it teaches teamwork and other issues which are applicable in real life
as well
. And
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have always liked arts and crafts.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
I am a creative person and like doing things with my hands. And my talents are I can dance and sing be well.
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IELTS essay Describe your talents, hobbies and any sports you enjoy

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