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Why do you want to apply this scholarship?

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Quality international education is one of the student expectations. However, there are just a few of them who can access this high-quality education. Due to family financial obstacles and the exchange rate, it makes the education look unreachable. Psychology is one of the interesting science that can be used in real life. It will be a good opportunity if I can be a high quality international educated student by this supportive scholarship which make my both languages and other life skills be improved Quality international education is one of the student expectations. However, there are just a few of them who can access this high-quality education. Due to family financial obstacles and the exchange rate, it makes the education look unreachable. Psychology is one of the interesting science that can be used in real life. It will be a good opportunity if I can be a high quality international educated student by this supportive scholarship which make my both languages and other life skills be improved
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international
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education
is one of the
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student
expectations.
However
, there are
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just
a few of them who can access this high-quality
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
. Due to family financial obstacles and the exchange rate, it
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makes
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
look unreachable. Psychology is one of the interesting science that can be
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used
in real
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life
. It will be a
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good
opportunity if I can be a high
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quality
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international
educated
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student
by this supportive scholarship which
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my both languages and other
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life
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IELTS essay Why do you want to apply this scholarship?

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