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Why do you think social skills are now being emphasized by companies during the recruitment process? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Why do you think social skills are now being emphasized by companies during the recruitment process? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 7JMnX
It is indeed that although, when organizations enrolling the new employee they can emphasized on their education. but they also consider about social skills of workers which assist to boost the company position among other firm's. There are numerous reasons why branchs highlights the social skills when they giving the jobs to individuals. At the immensely outset, the prime factor why soft skills are predominant for administration to enlisting the worker. Because, skilled worker can run the business in perfect way by gaining the profit as they have good communication skill, which assist the employee to talk with costomer in good way. Due to this, the costomer influence to buy the product from company. For example good communication skill help to make praiseworthy contact not merely in their nation as well as on international level. Therefore, company can spread there business all around the globe with good communication skill. Moreover, another excellent reason is, leadership quality is most imperative part of human being. It is common that in contemporary era, competition among distinct organisations are surging, so leadership quality aid the employee to running their business. Leadership quality is amazing skills which influence the people's at all. A survey was conducted by the government of the UK 2016, which found that 85 percent of employees have leadership quality among other kind of profit that gain by leaderinv in organisations. As a result, I would like to establish that. Social skills need to be cot when they are consription. Good communication skill as well as leadership quality are also major part of trades
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employee
they can
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on their education.
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also
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consider about social
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skills
of workers which assist to boost the
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company
position among other
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. There are numerous reasons why
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branchs
highlights the social
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skills
when
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they giving
the jobs to individuals. At the
immensely
outset, the prime factor why soft
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skills
are predominant for administration to enlisting the worker.
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good
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skill
, which assist the
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employee
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costomer
in
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company
can spread there business all around the globe with
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communication
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skill
.
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leadership
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most
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organisations
are surging,
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to running their business.
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government
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quality
among other kind of profit that gain by
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organisations
.
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, I would like to establish that. Social
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skills
need to be cot when they are
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consription
.
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skill
as well
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are
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trades
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IELTS essay Why do you think social skills are now being emphasized by companies during the recruitment process? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
261 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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