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In many modern societies, grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grandparents. What is the reason for this and how can it be overcome?

In many modern societies, grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grandparents. What is the reason for this and how can it be overcome? Jl295
In this contemporary world, juveniles don’t like to spend their leisure or important time with their grandparents. Also on this topic, many seminars and webinars were conducted, so they get rid of this issue. Overall there are a myriad of reasons for this but the major cause is adolescents' thought process varies for grandparents' thought. Due to which grandchildren start ignoring and disliking them. But the gran and grandpa always love their child’s kids more than their children and also bless them. To embark with, the primary reason 21st century adolescents live a modern lifestyle so their thinking capability differs from the person who lived in the 17th and 18th century, but it's obvious that when intellectual contradicts, arguments happen. Secondly, juveniles have less attachment with their ancestor and one of the cause is mentality. For instance, In small cities of India, most grandparents stop their son’s daughter from going to play. Also they believe she should not talk to boys and before 7 she should be at home. On the contrary, parents should always respect their parents and explain the importances of grandparents to their kids. Moreover, grans are also living their childhood at this age, so juveniles should take care of them. For example, in Indian culture to touch a feet is a sacraments to show respect to their grandones and when son’s childs do that they feel like they are in heaven because modern culture had forget this. In Conclusion, thinking ability of society is changes but grandparent’s love are gift god, we should be grateful for it. And respect them off.
In this contemporary world, juveniles don’t like to spend their leisure or
important
time with their
grandparents
.
Also
on this topic,
many
seminars and webinars
were conducted
,
so
they
get
rid of this issue.

Overall
there are a
myriad
of reasons for this
but
the major cause is adolescents'
thought
process varies for grandparents'
thought
. Due to which grandchildren
start
ignoring and disliking them.
But
the gran and grandpa always
love
their child’s kids more than their children and
also
bless them.

To embark with, the primary reason 21st century adolescents
live
a modern lifestyle
so
their thinking capability differs from the person who
lived
in the 17th and 18th century,
but
it's obvious that when intellectual contradicts, arguments happen.
Secondly
, juveniles have less attachment with their ancestor and one of the cause is mentality.
For instance
, In
small
cities of India, most
grandparents
stop
their son’s daughter from going to play.
Also
they believe she should not talk to boys and
before
7 she should be at home.

On the contrary
, parents should always respect their parents and
explain
the
importances
of
grandparents
to their kids.
Moreover
, grans are
also
living their childhood at this age,
so
juveniles should take care of them.
For example
, in Indian culture to touch
a feet
is
a sacraments
to
show
respect to their
grandones
and when son’s
childs
do that they feel like they are in heaven
because
modern culture had
forget
this.
In Conclusion
, thinking ability of society is
changes
but
grandparent’s
love
are gift god, we should be grateful for it. And respect them off.
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IELTS essay In many modern societies, grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grandparents. What is the reason for this and how can it be overcome?

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