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Where will you be living in 2035?

Where will you be living in 2035? RkdeG
It is a question with many answer options since I will not know what will happen in the next few hours, but I will try to give my life option 2035. In 2035, I will live in Switzerland, in a large two-story house, with a beautiful wife and a great view of the Swiss Alps. I will be 33 years old, I still would not have children. Due to technological advances and the presence of gadgets that replace people, we will be more monotonous; the human connection will be lost (something that makes the world a better place). I will drive to work in an electric car; electricity will be extracted mostly by renewable energy, and the era of oil will be left behind. Climate change will continue to worsen, the planet will be warmer, with extreme temperatures, but we will have to adapt. That would is a sketch of where I will live in 2035. Will it be a better world? I hope so.
It is a question with
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many
answer options since I will not know what will happen in the
next
few hours,
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but
I will try to give my life option 2035.

In 2035, I will
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live
in Switzerland, in a large two-story
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house
, with a
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beautiful
wife and a great view of the Swiss Alps. I will be 33 years
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old
, I
still
would not have children. Due to technological advances and the presence of gadgets that replace
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people
, we will be more monotonous; the human connection will
be lost
(something that
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makes
the world a better place). I will drive to work in an electric car; electricity will
be extracted
mostly
by renewable energy, and the era of oil will be
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left
behind. Climate
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change
will continue to worsen, the planet will be warmer, with extreme temperatures,
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but
we will
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have to
adapt. That would
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is
a sketch of where I will
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live
in 2035. Will it be a better world? I hope
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so
.
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IELTS essay Where will you be living in 2035?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
165 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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