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Question 1. In Colombia, is cheating considered a serious problem in sports?

Question 1. In Colombia, is cheating considered a serious problem in sports? bbB0l
Question 1. In Colombia, is cheating considered a serious problem in sports? Yes, it is a serious problem I have heard of several cheating scandals of doping in cycling, in soccer, where they bought the matches and chose the winner, especially during the period of influence of drug trafficking in Colombia, . . . Question 2. In what sports do you think cheating is most common? mmm I would think that in cycling, as a clear example the 7 victories in the Tour de France won by Mr. Lance Armstrong. Question 3. What kinds of things do people do when they cheat? Mmmm well, ingesting substances that enhance their abilities, giving them an advantage over the other competitors.
Question 1. In Colombia, is cheating considered a serious problem in sports?

Yes, it is a serious problem I have heard of several cheating scandals of doping in cycling, in soccer, where they
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Question 2. In what sports do you
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cheating is most common?

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that in cycling, as a
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example the 7 victories in the Tour de France won by Mr. Lance Armstrong.

Question 3. What kinds of things do
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people
do when they cheat?

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well, ingesting substances that enhance their abilities, giving them an advantage over the other competitors.
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IELTS essay Question 1. In Colombia, is cheating considered a serious problem in sports?

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