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Why do you think festivals are important events in the working year? Would you agree that the original significance of festivals is often lost today? Is it good or bad, do you think? Do you think that new festivals will be introduced in the future? What kind? What role do the media play in festivals, do you think? Do you think it’s good or bad to watch festivals on TV? Why? How may globalisation affect different festivals around the world?

Why do you think festivals are important events in the working year? Would you agree that the original significance of festivals is often lost today? Is it good or bad, do you think? Do you think that new festivals will be introduced in the future? What kind? What role do the media play in festivals, do you think? Do you think it’s good or bad to watch festivals on TV? Why? How may globalisation affect different festivals around the world? Jp30
Why do you think festivals are important events in the working year? Would you agree that the original significance of festivals is often lost today? Is it good or bad, do you think? Do you think that new festivals will be introduced in the future? What kind? What role do the media play in festivals, do you think? Do you think it’s good or bad to watch festivals on TV? Why? How may globalisation affect different festivals around the world?
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IELTS essay Why do you think festivals are important events in the working year? Would you agree that the original significance of festivals is often lost today? Is it good or bad, do you think? Do you think that new festivals will be introduced in the future? What kind? What role do the media play in festivals, do you think? Do you think it’s good or bad to watch festivals on TV? Why? How may globalisation affect different festivals around the world?

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
80 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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