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Doctoral study is a significant milestone in the perpetual journey to education and the best exposure to this would be a worthy platform to prove the skills and knowledge that I have learned. With due reverence to the department and the university, I pen down a ‘statement of purpose’. This statement is an endeavor to project my credentials as an aspiring researcher, my achievements as a biotechnology graduate, my interest in this doctoral program, and my ambitions. The dynamic nature of a living system fills me with wonder. This is precisely why I would like to pursue a career in research so that I can acquire new skills & knowledge and contribute to science. Both my school and college education has been inherent in shaping up my interests and future aspirations. I had excellent facilities and faculty, which emphasized fundamentals. This triggered my interest in academics and research and thus I have worked consistently towards a research career. Distinctions in my school exams, a Bachelor’s Degree in Biotechnology from Techno India University, India, Kolkata, and a Master’s Degree in Biotechnology from Heritage Institute of Technology, MAKAUT, Kolkata, India, I am now looking forward to doing a Ph. D. and sense that the experiences in my life have been so far instrumental in getting me equipped to embark on this venture. The comprehensive program that I undertook taught me both theoretical and practical aspects of a variety of life science subjects such as molecular biology, cell biology, immunology microbiology, genomics, bioprocess technology, environmental biology, medical biotechnology, Biostatistics, and many others. My dedication to studies even bagged me a fifty percent scholarship in my Master’s degree. During my university studies, I have pursued many projects, drawing upon the knowledge and skills that I acquired through classroom teaching as well as extensive practical training. Among the projects that I undertook, during my Bachelor’s in Technology on Biotechnology was “A brief study on the role of some genes related to non-communicable disease and effect of few medicinal plants on them”. The project was divided into two parts. In the first part, a few genes found to play important role in various non-communicable diseases were shortlisted based on data available from previously published work. For this purpose, an extensive search on existing literature was done using standard search portals such as Pubmed, Google Scholar, etc. 15 genes were selected and further information was collected about them from various open-source resources. In the second part of the work, 6 medicinal herbs and trees were selected to understand variation in their biochemical properties. These were shortlisted based on reports of their protective role against various non-communicable diseases. For this purpose, specific samples of different medicinal herbs and trees were collected to test the presence of various macro and micronutrients and thus the medicinal properties that they are involved in by accounting for the estimation of protein present in each sample, with the change in pH that they undergo. This project was a part of my dissertation that I completed under the guidance of Dr. Malavika Bhattacharya, Dept of Biotechnology, Techno India University, India, Kolkata from August 2018-August 2019. The observations were, that out of the 15 genes, most of them were involved in regulating pathways that were involved in one form of cancer or another. In addition, a few of these genes were found to regulate various inflammatory components, such as TNF-α and Interferons. It was during this project I started taking a liking for Immunology and Cancer Biology. I also started getting interested in the role of Immunology, both in non-communicable diseases, such as cancer, as well as the microbiome. I have further done a project presentation titled “Study of genes KRT14, EZR, PCSK1”. This presentation showed the roles of some rare genes such as Krt14: Little is known about the signaling mechanisms controlling meibomian gland (MG) homeostasis and the pathogenic processes leading to MG atrophy and dysfunction in dry eye disease (DED). I investigated the role of fibroblast growth factor receptor 2 (FGFR2) in the MG homeostasis of adult mice. EZR: Recent studies find in the identification of the EZR-rosi fusion gene in a mice model as an essential driver in oncogene lung carcinogenesis. Pcsk1: Implantation of high fat-diet glucose-intolerant mice activated brite enhances the systematic glucose tolerance. I have also worked at Techno India University, Kolkata, India on their project titled RAMT: Recent Aspects of Microbiological Techniques. Throughout my undergraduate and graduate career, I have equipped myself with participation in various technical symposiums attended seminars, and have done projects across a spectrum of fields. I believe that the interdisciplinary learning that I have strived to acquire, has taught me to look for answers and overcome challenges. Knowing various fields certainly makes that job easier, as we know which field can cater to what part of the solution. This approach has helped me in working in collaborative research initiatives and I wish to be a part of similar initiatives in the future. Therefore, I am now ready to pursue a Ph. D. to advance my career in basic and translational research. I am a keen and hard-working individual with a passion for Cell Biology, Genetics, Immunology, and Cancer Biology. I am certain that I will be able to cope with the rigors of an international curriculum with ease. Non-communicable diseases are a major cause of concern worldwide as they are responsible for most of the deaths, much higher than communicable diseases. So, vivid studies are required for a better understanding of the molecular mechanisms that govern these diseases. Medicinal plants are an important part of ongoing treatments. A lot of traditional approaches for addressing this group of diseases are based on local knowledge of unique plants which have protective/beneficial effects. A lot needs to be validated scientifically in this area. Hence, all such studies are important. The prospects of such studies include a better understanding of how each of these plant extracts affects the functioning of individual genes, those found to be involved in any of these diseases. Also, it would be interesting to look into the variation in the protective ability of each of these medicinal plants on one specific target gene. My research interest is to work on the mechanism of tumor cell metastasis and also to study the role of immune surveillance in modulating host responses in various non-communicable diseases, including cancer. I also want to engineer new technologies to improve diagnostics for early metastasis. The faculty with whom my research interest matches at Temple University is Dr. Bojana Gligorijevic. I found out that her research interests are cancer complexity, Tumour microenvironment, Mouse Model of Metastasis, etc. I further went through Gligorijevic Lab I found that her lab investigates mechanisms of tumor cell metastasis by implementing established and developing new microscopy technologies at multiple scales, combined with approaches from cell biology, tissue engineering, and systems biology. The focus of her lab is on the analysis of tumor microenvironment complexity and emergent tumor cell behaviors as they relate to the tumor microenvironment and its spatial and temporal changes, including extracellular matrix remodeling by tumor cells themselves. They strive towards predicting tumor cell decisions, which are a dynamical, ever-changing outcome of multiple mechanical and chemical signals from different cell-based and extracellular sources. They are also engineering new technologies and are highly curious about the mechanistic understanding of metastasis, their overarching goal is to translate our findings into improved diagnostics for early metastasis and point to novel therapeutic targets. I got exhilarated to find that my research interest matches her area of interest. If I get an opportunity to work under her supervision then I will be able to fulfill my ambition to research my area of interest I highly value time and resources and as highlighted in my application, I have worked hard in the last six years to thoroughly train myself to pursue a career in research. The cutting-edge research environment at Temple University with dedicated research teams and technological facilities will be highly suitable for advancing my career.
Doctoral
study
is a significant milestone in the perpetual journey to education and the best exposure to this would be a worthy platform to prove the
skills
and
knowledge
that I have learned. With due reverence to the department and the
university
, I pen down a ‘statement of purpose’. This statement is an endeavor to
project
my credentials as an aspiring researcher, my achievements as a biotechnology graduate, my
interest
in this doctoral program, and my ambitions.

The dynamic nature of a living system fills me with wonder. This is
precisely
why I would like to pursue a
career
in
research
so
that I can acquire
new
skills
&
knowledge
and contribute to science.

Both my school and college education has been inherent in shaping up my
interests
and future aspirations. I had excellent facilities and faculty, which emphasized fundamentals. This triggered my
interest
in academics and
research
and
thus
I have worked
consistently
towards a
research
career
. Distinctions in my school exams, a Bachelor’s Degree in Biotechnology from Techno India
University
, India, Kolkata, and a Master’s Degree in Biotechnology from Heritage Institute of
Technology
,
MAKAUT
, Kolkata, India, I am
now
looking forward to doing a
Ph. D.
and sense that the experiences in my life have been
so
far instrumental in getting me equipped to embark on this venture.

The comprehensive program that I undertook taught me both theoretical and practical aspects of a variety of life science subjects such as molecular
biology
,
cell
biology
, immunology microbiology, genomics,
bioprocess
technology
, environmental
biology
, medical biotechnology, Biostatistics, and
many
others. My dedication to
studies
even bagged me a fifty percent scholarship in my Master’s degree.

During my
university
studies
, I have pursued
many
projects
, drawing upon the
knowledge
and
skills
that I acquired through classroom teaching
as well
as extensive practical training. Among the
projects
that I undertook, during my Bachelor’s in
Technology
on Biotechnology was “A brief
study
on the
role
of
some
genes related to non-communicable
disease
and effect of few medicinal
plants
on them”. The
project
was divided
into two
parts
. In the
first
part
, a few genes
found
to play
important
role
in
various
non-communicable
diseases
were shortlisted
based on data available from previously published
work
. For this purpose, an extensive search on existing literature
was done
using standard search portals such as
Pubmed
, Google Scholar, etc. 15 genes
were selected
and
further
information
was collected
about them from
various
open-source resources. In the second
part
of the
work
, 6 medicinal herbs and trees
were selected
to understand variation in their biochemical properties. These
were shortlisted
based on reports of their protective
role
against
various
non-communicable
diseases
. For this purpose, specific samples of
different
medicinal herbs and trees
were collected
to
test
the presence of
various
macro and micronutrients and
thus
the medicinal properties that they
are involved
in by accounting for the estimation of protein present in each sample, with the
change
in pH that they undergo.

This
project
was a
part
of my dissertation that I completed under the guidance of Dr.
Malavika
Bhattacharya
, Dept of Biotechnology, Techno India
University
, India, Kolkata from August 2018-August 2019. The observations were, that out of the 15 genes, most of them
were involved
in regulating pathways that
were involved
in one form of
cancer
or another.
In addition
, a few of these genes were
found
to regulate
various
inflammatory components, such as
TNF-α
and
Interferons
. It was during this
project
I
started
taking a liking for Immunology and
Cancer
Biology
. I
also
started
getting interested in the
role
of Immunology, both in non-communicable
diseases
, such as
cancer
,
as well
as the
microbiome
.

I have
further
done a
project
presentation titled
“Study
of genes KRT14,
EZR
, PCSK1”. This presentation
showed
the
roles
of
some
rare genes such as Krt14:
Little
is known
about the signaling
mechanisms
controlling
meibomian
gland (MG) homeostasis and the pathogenic processes leading to MG atrophy and dysfunction in dry eye
disease
(
DED
). I investigated the
role
of fibroblast growth factor receptor 2 (FGFR2) in the MG homeostasis of adult mice.
EZR
: Recent
studies
find in the identification of the
EZR-rosi
fusion gene in a mice model as an essential driver in oncogene lung
carcinogenesis
. Pcsk1: Implantation of high
fat
-diet glucose-intolerant mice activated
brite
enhances the systematic glucose tolerance.

I have
also
worked at Techno India
University
, Kolkata, India on their
project
titled
RAMT
: Recent Aspects of Microbiological Techniques.

Throughout my undergraduate and graduate
career
, I have equipped myself with participation in
various
technical symposiums attended seminars, and have done
projects
across a spectrum of fields.

I believe that the interdisciplinary learning that I have strived to acquire, has taught me to look for answers and overcome challenges. Knowing
various
fields
certainly
makes
that job easier, as we know which field can cater to what
part
of the solution. This approach has
helped
me in working in collaborative
research
initiatives and I wish to be a
part
of similar initiatives in the future.

Therefore
, I am
now
ready to pursue a
Ph. D.
to advance my
career
in basic and translational
research
. I am a keen and
hard
-working individual with a passion for
Cell
Biology
, Genetics, Immunology, and
Cancer
Biology
. I am certain that I will be able to cope with the rigors of an international curriculum with
ease
.

Non-communicable
diseases
are a major cause of concern worldwide as they are responsible for most of the deaths, much higher than communicable
diseases
.
So
, vivid
studies
are required
for a better understanding of the molecular
mechanisms
that govern these
diseases
. Medicinal
plants
are an
important
part
of ongoing treatments.
A lot of
traditional approaches for addressing this group of
diseases
are based
on local
knowledge
of unique
plants
which have protective/beneficial effects. A lot needs to
be validated
scientifically
in this area.
Hence
, all such
studies
are
important
. The prospects of such
studies
include a better understanding of how each of these
plant
extracts affects the functioning of individual genes, those
found
to
be involved
in any of these
diseases
.
Also
, it would be interesting to look into the variation in the protective ability of each of these medicinal
plants
on one specific target gene.

My
research
interest
is to
work
on the
mechanism
of
tumor
cell
metastasis
and
also
to
study
the
role
of immune surveillance in modulating host responses in
various
non-communicable
diseases
, including
cancer
. I
also
want to engineer
new
technologies
to
improve
diagnostics for early
metastasis
. The faculty with whom my
research
interest
matches at Temple
University
is Dr.
Bojana
Gligorijevic
. I
found
out that her
research
interests
are
cancer
complexity,
Tumour
microenvironment
, Mouse Model of
Metastasis
, etc. I
further
went through
Gligorijevic
Lab I
found
that her lab investigates
mechanisms
of
tumor
cell
metastasis
by implementing established and developing
new
microscopy
technologies
at multiple scales, combined with approaches from
cell
biology
, tissue engineering, and systems biology.

The focus of her lab is on the analysis of
tumor
microenvironment
complexity and emergent
tumor
cell
behaviors as they relate to the
tumor
microenvironment
and its spatial and temporal
changes
, including extracellular matrix remodeling by
tumor
cells
themselves. They strive towards predicting
tumor
cell
decisions, which are a dynamical, ever-changing outcome of multiple mechanical and chemical signals from
different
cell-based and extracellular sources. They are
also
engineering
new
technologies
and are
highly
curious about the mechanistic understanding of
metastasis
, their overarching goal is to translate our findings into
improved
diagnostics for early
metastasis
and point to novel therapeutic targets. I
got
exhilarated to find that my
research
interest
matches her area of
interest
. If I
get
an opportunity to
work
under her supervision then I will be able to fulfill my ambition to
research
my area of interest

I
highly
value time and resources and as highlighted in my application, I have worked
hard
in the last six years to
thoroughly
train myself to pursue a
career
in
research
. The cutting-edge
research
environment at Temple
University
with dedicated
research
teams and technological facilities will be
highly
suitable for advancing my
career
.
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