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introduce about myself and my family

introduce about myself and my family 6K1Nl
Good afternoon teacher, let me introduce myself. My name is Ta Thi Thu Giang. My family usually calls me Bong. My hometown is laying in Thai Binh which is famous for its spacious rice paddy called "chị hai năm tấn". Thái Bình is also the hometown of sơn tùng MTP a singer in VietNam. I’m a student in class DH11NA3 at the Hanoi University of Natural resources and Environment. My family has four people: my parents, my brother and me. My mom is the closest person to me because I often share everything I do. I am a sociable and funny person so, during my free time, I always go out and talk with my friend. my hobbies are watching films, listening to music that makes me feel relaxed and excited. The career of the future, I want to be a lecturer and open a bilingual center for those who want to lealisteningall about myself. Thanks for listening. Now I want to talk about my topic. My topic is. . .
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Good
afternoon teacher,
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let
me introduce myself. My name is Ta
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Thi
Thu
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Giang
. My family
usually
calls me Bong.
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My
hometown is laying in Thai
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Binh
which is
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famous
for its spacious rice paddy called
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"
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chị
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hai
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năm
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tấn
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"
.
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Thái
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Bình
is
also
the hometown of
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sơn
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tùng
MTP a singer in
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VietNam
. I’m a student in
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class
DH11NA3 at the Hanoi University of Natural resources and Environment. My family has four
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people
: my parents, my brother and me. My mom is the closest person to me
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because
I
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often
share everything I do. I am a sociable and
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funny
person
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so
, during my free time, I always go out and talk with my friend.
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my
hobbies are watching films, listening to music that
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makes
me feel relaxed and excited. The career of the future, I want to be a lecturer and open a bilingual center for those who want to
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lealisteningall
about myself. Thanks for listening.
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Now
I want to talk about my topic. My topic is.
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IELTS essay introduce about myself and my family

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
171 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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