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why do you or do you not enjoy shopping and explain what type of shopper are you?

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I always enjoy shopping if there are consisted of right products or services. Concerning quality comparing with the price, might be my description since I categorized myself between a bargain hunter and an excessive shopper. If I need to choose one category, I will define myself as a bargain hunter. From my perspective, being a bargain hunter is not wrong if you know the limit. In the market, they always add profit so that price negotiation is not bad. They not only add profit but also add discounts because they know how to get more customers. That is why I enjoy shopping and being a bargain hunter.
I always enjoy shopping if there
are consisted
of right products or services. Concerning quality comparing with the price, might be my description since I categorized myself between a
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bargain
hunter and an excessive shopper. If I need to choose one category, I will define myself as a
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bargain
hunter. From my perspective, being a
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bargain
hunter is not
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wrong
if you know the limit. In the market, they always
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add
profit
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so
that price negotiation is not
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bad
. They not
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only
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add
profit
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also
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add
discounts
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because
they know how to
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get
more customers.
That is
why I enjoy shopping and being a
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bargain
hunter.
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IELTS essay why do you or do you not enjoy shopping and explain what type of shopper are you?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
107 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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