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Why do we need to talk about men

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They planning to tattooed next to his neck, he petrified from laser. Talking about masculinity to a writer and film producer which is the tale is full with man voice such as frustrated volume for any kind of movies and express the impression in these likely sequences. while I listening from 4 to 5 I heard about a men who is trap in masculinity, it seems like cartoon or even illusion mindset in our thoughts. Promando is a project which is in UK, US and etc calling a man box. The project recounts a super hero in animations which is 70% or even more do not responsible for own job and seeking to be a hero. My understanding from hearing to this podcast scientist who are working on this section, telling a true tale about suicide or domestic violence in society is going up.
They planning
to tattooed
next
to his neck, he petrified from laser.

Talking about masculinity to a writer and film producer which is the tale is
full with
man
voice such as frustrated volume for any kind of movies and express the impression in these likely sequences.

while
I listening
from 4 to 5 I heard about a
men
who
is
trap in masculinity, it seems like cartoon or even illusion mindset in our thoughts.

Promando
is a project which is in UK, US
and etc
calling a
man
box.

The project recounts a super hero in animations which is 70% or even more do not responsible for
own
job and seeking to be a hero.

My understanding from hearing to this podcast scientist who are working on this section, telling a true tale about suicide or domestic violence in society is going up.
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IELTS essay Why do we need to talk about men

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
144 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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