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why do they celebrate christmas and how do they celebrate christmas

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Christmas Christmas is celebrated by Catholics and Christians in all over the world. It is in December month. Catholics and Christians make Christmas trees and they make cribs. In December month near to 20th it is very cool. They go to mass at 12: 00 midnight. They decorate their houses beautifully. They make Christmas cake. In December month all the Christian and catholic children write all the good things that they had done in the whole December month. All the children love Santa Claus. Some times children keep gifts for Santa Claus like Santa Claus also giving them gifts. Santa Claus also taking the little children gift without ignoring. Some children ask questions from Santa Claus and Santa Claus also replying to the questions for the little children without writing answers. It mean if you ask "what is the food Santa Claus like best? " Santa Claus will paste some pictures of food which Santa clause like best or any other way. As I know last year i asked from Santa Claus"what colour does Santa Claus like best? " so Santa Claus replied a blue colour A4 sheet without writing even a word, and my sister too asked question and Santa clause replied her also the way Santa clause had replied for me, with that question me and my sister sent a 2 little hand made gifts for Santa clause and when we came home the gifts we had made for Santa clause is not there and there are another to gifts for me and my sister it mean Santa clause had come to my house and took the gifts we made to Santa clause and Santa clause had kept Our gifts for Christmas.
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Christmas Christmas
is celebrated
by Catholics and Christians in all over the world. It is in December
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month
. Catholics and Christians
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make
Christmas trees and they
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cribs. In December
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month
near to 20th it is
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very
cool. They go to mass at 12: 00 midnight. They decorate their
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houses
beautifully
.
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They
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make
Christmas cake. In December
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month
all the Christian and catholic
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children
write all the
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good
things that they had done in the whole December
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. All the
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children
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love
Santa Claus.
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Some
times
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children
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keep
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gifts
for Santa Claus like Santa Claus
also
giving them
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. Santa Claus
also
taking the
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little
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children
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gift
without ignoring.
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Some
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ask
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from Santa Claus and Santa Claus
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replying to the
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questions
for the
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little
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without writing answers. It
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mean
if you ask
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"
what is the food Santa Claus like best?
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"
Santa Claus will paste
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some
pictures of food which Santa
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clause
like best or any other way.

As I know last year
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i
asked from Santa Claus
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"
what
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colour
does Santa Claus like best?
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"
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so
Santa Claus replied a blue
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colour
A4 sheet without writing even a word, and my sister too asked
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and Santa
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clause
replied her
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the way Santa
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had replied for me, with that
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me and my sister
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a 2
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little
hand made
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for Santa
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clause
and when we came home the
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we had made for Santa
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is not there and there are another to
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for me and my sister it
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mean
Santa
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clause
had
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come
to my
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house
and took the
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we made to Santa
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and Santa
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had
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Our
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IELTS essay why do they celebrate christmas and how do they celebrate christmas

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
284 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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