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Few decades ago several students used to pursue their higher education in their home country. However, in recent times there is an increased number of students flying abroad for their studies.

Few decades ago several students used to pursue their higher education in their home country. However, in recent times there is an increased number of students flying abroad for their studies. dop5K
A few decades ago several students used to pursue their higher education in their home country. However, in recent times there is an increased number of students flying abroad for their studies. In my opinion, this trend will benefit the student to explore the education system of the other side of world and simultaneously home country will lose potential and talented candidates. The major advantage of moving to other country for study purpose is exploring the new educational system and understanding their methodology of imparting knowledge. This will help the students to understand subject matter more practically and effectively as compared to the home country education system. It has been observed that students studying in abroad are practically more exposed than a regional candidate. International colleges will provide the platforms to study with most advanced techniques and standards that will prepare them for real time market. On the other hand, this trend will lead to brain drain policy, as talented candidate will leave the home country and most of the times potential candidates never return because of lucrative and handsome salaries paid in the abroad. Moreover, the student will apply for permanent visa from initials student visa leading to loss of talented human resource to home country. The recent studies show that only 20% of the students who went to abroad will return to home country. This will affect the home country resource, loosing extraordinary talented students. In conclusion, moving abroad for studies has several advantages as a student but, the brain drain system will have a negative impact on the home country resources.
A few decades ago several
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used
to pursue their higher education in their home
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country
.
However
, in recent times there is an increased number of
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students
flying
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abroad
for their
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studies
. In my opinion, this trend will benefit the
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student
to explore the education
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system
of the other side of world and
simultaneously
home
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country
will lose potential and
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talented
candidates.

The major advantage of moving to other
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country
for
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study
purpose is exploring the new educational
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system
and understanding their methodology of imparting knowledge. This will
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help
the
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students
to understand
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subject matter
more
practically
and
effectively
as compared to the home
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country
education
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system
. It has
been observed
that
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students
studying in
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abroad
are
practically
more exposed than a regional candidate. International colleges will provide the platforms to
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study
with most advanced techniques and standards that will prepare them for real time market.

On the other hand
, this trend will lead to brain drain policy, as
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talented
candidate will
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leave
the home
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country
and
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most of the times
potential candidates never return
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because
of lucrative and handsome salaries paid in the
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abroad
.
Moreover
, the
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student
will apply for permanent visa from initials
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student
visa leading to loss of
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talented
human resource to home
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country
. The recent
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studies
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show
that
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only
20% of the
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students
who went to
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abroad
will return to home
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country
. This will affect the home
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country
resource, loosing extraordinary
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talented
students.

In conclusion
, moving
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abroad
for
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studies
has several advantages as a
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student
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but
, the brain drain
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system
will have a
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negative
impact on the home
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country
resources.
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IELTS essay Few decades ago several students used to pursue their higher education in their home country. However, in recent times there is an increased number of students flying abroad for their studies.

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4 paragraphs
264 words
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