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Why do some people work harder

Why do some people work harder NMELN

Also, disadvantaged children have to study much harder than privileged children to earn the same educational opportunities. For example, Ivanka Trump was able to study at the Wharton School of Finance without the usual academic qualifications because her father is rich and famous. However, if kids from low-income families want to get into that same college, they have to study extremely hard to meet the scholarship standards because there is no way their parents could afford such an expensive private school.

Also
, disadvantaged children This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 study much harder than privileged children to earn the same educational opportunities. For example
, Ivanka Trump was able to study at the Wharton School of Finance without the usual academic qualifications This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 her father is rich and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
. However
, if kids from low-income families want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 into that same college, they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 study extremely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 the scholarship standards This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 there is no way their parents could afford such an expensive private school. 