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Medical services should be under control of government

Medical services should be under control of government pJ3Ey

Medical services is one of the most importnat factor need to be considered for humans. It plays a vital role in the country economy and healthwise if we give authority to government instead of giving it to private. For example, the government have the control of medical services, poor people can survive their lives. If its no under govt orgnaization the people will not able to pay and will die consequently due to the diseases. On the other hand, there is corruption if it comes to the private control. Nowadays, medical services control under private organizations which may not be helpful to poor people. For instance, those who is having more money they only can survive longer compared to others. It will greatly effect to the economic and health of the nation. It concludes, Medical services should use under govt control to bring the development for country.

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Medical
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services
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importnat
 factor need to be considered
 for humans.

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healthwise
 if we give authority to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
instead
 of giving it to private.

For example
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 have the control of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpharmaceuticaltherapeuticpreventivemedicinal
medical
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services
, poor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can survive their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
.

If its Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?now
no
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orgnaization
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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die
consequently
 due to the diseases.

On the other hand
, there is corruption if it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 to the private control.

Nowadays, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpharmaceuticaltherapeuticpreventivemedicinal
medical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
 control under private organizations which may not be helpful to poor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
.

For instance
, those who is having more money they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 can survive longer compared to others.

It will greatly
Did you mean "affect"?affect
effect
 to the economic and health of the nation.

It concludes, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpharmaceuticaltherapeuticpreventivemedicinal
Medical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutyuseofficebusinesssupplyassistance
services
 should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 under govt control to bring the development for country. 