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The Eco-Generation Environmental Essay Competition

The Eco-Generation Environmental Essay Competition R2e6o

I am Nhi. I twelve years old and I study at university of Law on Ho Chi Minh city in VietNam. when I accidentally came across a video of sea creatures mistakenly eating human plastic waste. Then they gradually weaken and die. makes me extremely sad and that is the motivation for me to participate in this contest. this is not only a place for exams but also a place for me to express my feelings about environmental protection.

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Nhi
. I twelve years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and I study at university of Law on If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Ho Chi Minh City
Ho Chi Minh city
 in Possible spelling mistake found.Vietnam
VietNam
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
when
 I accidentally
 came across a video of sea creatures mistakenly
 eating human plastic waste. Then they gradually
 weaken and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :pass away
die
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMakes
makes
 me extremely
 sad and that is
 the motivation for me to participate in this contest. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThis
this
 is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 a place for exams This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 a place for me to express my feelings about environmental protection. 

IELTS essay The Eco-Generation Environmental Essay Competition

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

79 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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