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many people think that social media having a bad effect on teenagers these days do you agree or not

many people think that social media having a bad effect on teenagers these days do you agree or not pJ3O2
a social networking like Facebook having a many bad effect on children. this is not good for under 18 years children. that's effect a very bad to on both individuals and society. this social network is not for children because the Facebook is not for children a Facebook having a huge negative effect. for example, i saw in newspaper Facebook are not good for children. in google survey on social network and survey result is many children are using social media that is not safe to children because this social network having a many bad impact. that social networking like Facebook are not good for children because they having bad effect.
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IELTS essay many people think that social media having a bad effect on teenagers these days do you agree or not

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
111 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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