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Why do people in the modern world tend to buy more than they need?

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Several factors could prompt excessive spending. To begin with, brands want to boost consumer purchase so a wide range of goods become increasingly cheaper, attracting shoppers to many low-priced products available. As the a result, purchasers would be more willing to buy new items and throw away old yet still functionable ones. Another contributing factor can be advertisements, since all kinds of them appear everywhere people can see. They are susceptible to advertising which promotes the value of material possessions and are tempted by shiny slogans with celebrities promising them a better life. Consequently, they are convinced to buy more than they need.

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