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What are the solutions to help people spend more wisely?

What are the solutions to help people spend more wisely? PrE5X
Several solutions could be applied to help people improve their financial management. One possible way is to identify spending priorities by HAVING a fixed budget for important expenses such as rent, utility bills, daily necessities and leisure spending such as clothes, entertainment is a good idea. Furthermore, before people buy something, they should think about how it will affect them in the future and ask themselves “How long can it be useful? ”. Such a practice would be able to help them avoid over-spending on insignificant things. Another method is to track spending patterns by keeping a record of their spending activities and identifying expenses they can reduce or eliminate. This solution might help people devise a budget plan for better spending habits.
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their financial management. One possible way is to identify
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spending
priorities by HAVING a
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fixed
budget for
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important
expenses such as rent, utility bills, daily necessities and leisure
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spending
such as clothes, entertainment is a
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good
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before
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people
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buy
something, they should
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think
about how it will affect them in the future and ask themselves “How long can it be useful? ”. Such a practice would be able to
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help
them avoid over-spending on insignificant things. Another method is to
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track
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spending
patterns by keeping a record of their
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spending
activities and identifying expenses they can
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reduce
or eliminate. This solution might
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help
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people
devise a budget plan for better
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spending
habits.
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IELTS essay What are the solutions to help people spend more wisely?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
123 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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