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ocassion when you saw lot of people smiling

ocassion when you saw lot of people smiling gDbr1

Well! the stress level is too high nowadays among people that we don't see them smiling much. Nevetheless here! I would like to talk about a situation when the bulk of individual found smiling. Actually, last month, I went to mall of Amritsar with my friend whose name is abhinav for doing some shopping. After doing shopping for one hour we went done from 3 floor and there was noise a which attracted our mind. we didn't know the exact reason and after that we came to know that it was famous actor who were present there. Moreover, we felt elater and amazed to saw that masses are so indulged in these activity. Ecentually, I saw that people cracking jokes to each other and felt very happy. After attending this ocassion, I fleet motivated and surprised to see people who were smiling. Due to this lockdown, this couldn't be possible. when I came back home I said this to my family or friends. They were also amused to hear about that takl. Overall. it was one of my great experiences in the life. I came to know that this ocassions are really a great stress buster in these tough times and people ought to take participate in that.

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stress
 level is too high nowadays among You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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see
 them smiling much.

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Nevetheless
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abhinav
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some
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doing shopping
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we
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famous
 actor who were present there. Moreover
, we felt Possible spelling mistake found.laterSlatereaterelatedelateselate
elater
 and amazed to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
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so
 indulged in Did you mean "this activity" or "these activities"?this activitythese activities
these activity
. Possible spelling mistake found.Eventually
Ecentually
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 cracking jokes to each other and felt This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy.

After attending this Possible spelling mistake found.occasionpassionPassionomissioncessionscansion
ocassion
, I fleet motivated and surprised to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who were smiling. Due to this lockdown, this couldn't be possible. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
when
 I came back home I said this to my family or friends. They were also
 amused to hear about that Possible spelling mistake found.taketailtalktallAKLTKL
takl
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Overall
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it
 was one of my great experiences in the life. I came to know that this Possible spelling mistake found.occasionspassionsomissionsPassionscessions
ocassions
 are really
 a great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 buster in these tough times and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 ought to take participate in that. 