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why do people follow the trends and social standards?

why do people follow the trends and social standards? OVRAG
II. INTRODUCTION A science fiction novel written by Philip K. Dick with the title Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep has thousands of lessons for its readers. The novel talks about the human nature. The story underlines several matters that people may face in their life which reflects on how human lives their life in the future. Starting from people’s dependency to the technologies, the influence of mass media, false religion, consumerism, less empathy, false identity, mind control, and many more. When I read the book, I noted that Deckard, the main character in the novel is living with the idea of consumerism whereby he has an envy feeling for the other people who can afford exotic animals. In the book, people use the real animal to raise their social rank. They buy fancy things even though they do not really need it. Consumerism is the talking point in the novel that will be discussed in this paper along with the main character in the novel, Rick Deckard, a bounty hunter who wants to kill the nexus-6 in order to buy real sheep to impress his neighbours. Consumerism refers to the idea of purchasing goods which is always increasing and it makes people being obsessive about it and feels that their well-being and happiness depends on the obtaining those goods, specially fancy things. In relation, their thoughts is influence by the mass media through the advertisement that. In addition, the meaning of consumerism in the novel is also related to the sense of envy within the community in real life. Normally, self-esteem, prestige, and life style are the internal factors that lead someone to consumerism and competition. Rick Deckard represents the idea of consumerism that categorize into life standard in the humanity described in the book whereby Rick Deckard is obsessed to consumerism, in this case to buy real animal as by having a real animal is confirming that his social rank is high according to the living standard that exists in that society (Dick, 1968, p. 5). In Indonesia, social competition among the people happens. The society is competing to afford luxuries such as branded goods to increase their social ranks. The worst case is about those who are willing to do anything in order to achieve their goals which includes to lift their social status. The writer found that the subject consumerism and social competition is interesting because it reflects to the lifestyle of the people living in the modern society. Rick Deckard and consumerism in the book showing something similar on how society lives nowadays. Additionally, the question is about what is wrong with our society nowadays, Why society should care about the luxury goods and social competition? . In real life, due to the consumerism, many people are competing to evaluate their social status by buying fancy things. For instance, the latest release of branded bag, clothes, exotic animals, and many more. This shows that people follow the community standard, and using the luxurious goods and exotic animals to confirm their social degree. II. FINDINGS Rick Deckard in the book represents the idea of consumerism. The evidences of Rick Deckard and Consumerism can be seen in several chapters of the Philip K. Dick’s book. In the chapter one of Philip's work, it is written that Rick Deckard in the morning thinks to afford a real sheep to replace the fake one that they have (Dick, 1968, p. 3). According to Philip Dick, “"Ever thought of selling your horse? " Rick asked. He wished to god he had a horse, in fact any animal. Owning and maintaining a fraud had a way of gradually demoralizing one. And yet from a social standpoint, it had to be done, ”(5). In here, it shows that Deckard is being envied to his neighbour’s real animal, and he wants to buy the real animal as same as the one belongs to Bill Barbour as the society will be amazed. Furthermore, starting from chapter four until twenty two, in some part of the chapter always mentions having a real and an exotic animal is a centre point of Rick Deckard. As Rick Deckard had completed his mission as a bounty hunter, finally he went to the animal store to afford the real animal, a luxurious goat animal which confirms that buying the correct things is the only way for Deckard to be happy even though he does not really need it. It can be noted on chapter fifteen of the novel whereas Philip Dick, “I own an animal now, he said to himself. A living animal, not electric. ” (Dick, 1968, p. 75). In addition, consumerism and social rivalry can be found in Indonesian Society mainly the celebrities and socialite groups in Indonesia. Many of the them value more the expensive items, having envy feeling and brag their belongings to the others, which in further leads to competition between them. Competing to buy branded goods, luxurious car, exotic pets. This is reflected in the idea of Consumerism. Subsequently, the majority of them are pleased to do anything to accomplish their dreams, including taking risks. In fact, there is a lot of proof that denotes to the existence of consumerism and social competition within the circle of Indonesian community as well as the elite groups. The first evidence comes from one of Indonesian singer who admitted on an interview session that she previously bought a branded bag just because to preserve her classy status as her surroundings told her to do so (Ari Lasso TV, 2020). Many of Indonesian community obsessed with hunting the exotic animals (Emerson, 2018). It is proven by how the celebrities and elite exhibit their exotic animals on social media and TV (Detik, 2011). Those pets include Savannah Cat, Sphynx cat, tiger, and many more (Pasha, 2019). On the other side, there are also some people who willing to take risks just for the consumerism and social status. It is demonstrated by several cases. Firstly, case of Indonesia socialite who stole a Louis Vuitton handbag in Melbourne, Australia (Beers, 2020). Another case comes from the issue of prostitutions that often occurred. Then, a teenager that stole a laptop (Liputan 6, 2018). People nowadays and society described in the Philip’s book and nowadays try to follow the standard and trends created in their surroundings. The previous statement raised a question, “why do people should care about it? ”. Perhaps they are lack of self-esteem and confidence which make them afraid to be not accepted by the society. Therefore they follow the trends and standards. III. DISCUSSIONS The evidences of the manual Do Android Dream of Electric Sheep? and Indonesian news provided in the findings section has its correlations. The evidences lead to hypothesis that people nowadays and society described in the Philip’s book use luxurious animals and goods to measure their social ranks. Therefore they compete and willing to do anything for it, even families. However, the question is why they should do it? . In the novel, Rick Deckard’s behaviours confirms that he is selfish and greedy for animals with expensive price just to impress his neighbours. Hence, he killed the Nexus-6 androids in order to afford a real animal. It is clearly indicated that Rick Deckard does not care how can he afford his desirable pet, what matter is to buy it as form the social standpoint it has to be done. It means that Rick Deckard indeed attempts to follow the standards in his society. Over here in Indonesia we can see the same points as written in the Philip Dick’s book, it is about the consumerism and competition in the community. There is considerable celebrities, socialites and elites who have a desire of owning fancy things and exotic pets (Pasha, 2019). This is proven by the news and references provided in the finding session whereby there is a trend and social standard created among them to possess luxurious stuff and pets. For instance, Marion Jola, singer who recognized that she ever bought a branded bag because of her sense of prestige as there is a community standard of owning luxurious things from her surroundings. The other one is a socialite who stole a Luis Vuitton handbag as her surroundings have branded bag as the social standard (Beers, 2020). Furthermore, the trend of owning an exotic pet within the celebrities and elite groups. It can be noted from the YouTube channel of several celebrities. For example, mass media and the YouTube channel that exhibit Irfan Hakim’s exotic pet, Aldabra tortoise, Alshad Ahmad’s Bengal tiger, Raditya Dika’s Sphynx cat, and so much more (Pasha, 2019). This asserts the correlation between the concept of consumerism in the book and Indonesian society whereby people’s envy feeling and prestige resulted them to follow the trends and social standards in order to their social ranks even though in fact they do not really need it. In conclusion, people's lifestyle nowadays is extremely influential by the mass media, trends and social standard. Many of their lives with the idea of consumerism as they have an envy feeling towards the others. They are obsessing of fancy things and exotic animals, they will not feel good if they did not have it and it is hard for them to be satisfied with all that they have. This show how greedy people are just to impress the public.
II. INTRODUCTION

A science fiction
novel
written by Philip K.
Dick
with the title Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep has thousands of lessons for its readers. The
novel
talks about the human nature. The story underlines several matters that
people
may face in their
life
which reflects on how human
lives
their
life
in the future. Starting from
people’s
dependency to the technologies, the influence of
mass
media
, false religion, consumerism, less empathy, false identity, mind control, and
many
more. When I read the
book
, I noted that
Deckard
, the main character in the
novel
is
living
with the
idea
of consumerism whereby he has an
envy
feeling
for the
other
people
who
can
afford
exotic
animals
. In the
book
,
people
use
the
real
animal
to raise their
social
rank
. They
buy
fancy
things
even though
they do not
really
need it. Consumerism is the talking point in the
novel
that will
be discussed
in this paper along with the main character in the
novel
, Rick
Deckard
, a bounty hunter
who
wants to kill the nexus-6 in
order
to
buy
real
sheep to impress his
neighbours
. Consumerism refers to the
idea
of purchasing
goods
which is always increasing and it
makes
people
being obsessive about it and feels that their well-being and happiness depends on the obtaining those
goods
,
specially
fancy
things. In relation, their thoughts is influence by the
mass
media
through the advertisement that.
In addition
, the meaning of consumerism in the
novel
is
also
related to the sense of
envy
within the
community
in
real
life
.
Normally
, self-esteem, prestige, and
life
style are the internal factors that lead someone to consumerism and competition.

Rick
Deckard
represents the
idea
of consumerism that categorize into
life
standard
in the humanity
described
in the
book
whereby Rick
Deckard
is obsessed
to consumerism,
in this case
to
buy
real
animal
as by having a
real
animal
is confirming that his
social
rank
is high according to the
living
standard
that exists in that
society
(Dick
, 1968, p. 5). In Indonesia,
social
competition
among the
people
happens
. The
society
is competing to
afford
luxuries such as
branded
goods
to increase their
social
ranks
. The worst case is about those
who
are willing to do anything in
order
to achieve their goals which includes to lift their
social
status
.
The
writer found that the subject consumerism and
social
competition
is interesting
because
it reflects to the lifestyle of the
people
living
in the modern
society
. Rick
Deckard
and consumerism in the
book
showing something similar on how
society
lives
nowadays
.
Additionally
, the question is about what is
wrong
with our
society
nowadays
, Why
society
should care about the luxury
goods
and
social
competition
?
.
In
real
life
, due to the consumerism,
many
people
are competing to evaluate their
social
status
by buying
fancy
things.
For instance
, the latest release of
branded
bag
, clothes,
exotic
animals
, and
many
more. This
shows
that
people
follow
the
community
standard
, and using the
luxurious
goods
and
exotic
animals
to confirm their
social
degree.

II. FINDINGS

Rick
Deckard
in the
book
represents the
idea
of consumerism. The
evidences
of Rick
Deckard
and Consumerism can be
seen
in several
chapters
of the Philip K.
Dick’s
book
. In the
chapter
one of Philip's work, it
is written
that Rick
Deckard
in the morning
thinks
to
afford
a
real
sheep to replace the fake one that they have
(Dick
, 1968, p. 3). According to Philip
Dick
, “
"
Ever
thought
of selling your horse?
"
Rick asked. He wished to god he had a horse, in fact any
animal
.
Owning
and maintaining a fraud had a way of
gradually
demoralizing one. And
yet
from a
social
standpoint, it had to
be done
, ”(5). In here, it
shows
that
Deckard
is
being envied
to his
neighbour
’s
real
animal
, and he wants to
buy
the
real
animal
as same as the one belongs to Bill Barbour as the
society
will
be amazed
.
Furthermore
, starting from
chapter
four until
twenty two
, in
some
part of the
chapter
always mentions having a
real
and an
exotic
animal
is a
centre
point of Rick
Deckard
. As Rick
Deckard
had completed his mission as a bounty hunter,
finally
he went to the
animal
store to
afford
the
real
animal
, a
luxurious
goat
animal
which confirms that buying the correct things is the
only
way for
Deckard
to be happy
even though
he does not
really
need it. It can
be noted
on
chapter
fifteen of the
novel
whereas Philip
Dick
, “I
own
an
animal
now
, he said to himself. A
living
animal
, not electric. ”
(Dick
, 1968, p. 75).

In addition
, consumerism and
social
rivalry can
be found
in Indonesian
Society
mainly
the
celebrities
and
socialite
groups in Indonesia.
Many
of
the them
value more the expensive items, having
envy
feeling
and brag their belongings to the others, which in
further
leads to
competition
between them. Competing to
buy
branded
goods
,
luxurious
car,
exotic
pets
. This
is reflected
in the
idea
of Consumerism.
Subsequently
, the majority of them are
pleased
to do anything to accomplish their dreams, including taking
risks
. In fact, there is
a lot of
proof that denotes to the existence of consumerism and
social
competition
within the circle of Indonesian
community
as well
as the
elite
groups. The
first
evidence
comes
from one of Indonesian singer
who
admitted on an interview session that she previously
bought
a
branded
bag
just
because
to preserve her classy
status
as her
surroundings
told
her to do
so
(
Ari
Lasso TV, 2020).

Many
of Indonesian
community
obsessed with hunting the
exotic
animals
(Emerson, 2018). It
is proven
by how the
celebrities
and
elite
exhibit their
exotic
animals
on
social
media
and TV (
Detik
, 2011). Those
pets
include Savannah Cat,
Sphynx
cat, tiger, and
many
more (Pasha, 2019). On the
other
side, there are
also
some
people
who
willing to take
risks
just
for the consumerism and
social
status
. It
is demonstrated
by several cases.
Firstly
, case of Indonesia
socialite
who
stole a Louis Vuitton handbag in Melbourne, Australia (Beers, 2020). Another case
comes
from the issue of
prostitutions
that
often
occurred. Then, a
teenager
that stole a laptop (
Liputan
6, 2018).
People
nowadays
and
society
described
in the Philip’s
book
and
nowadays
try to
follow
the
standard
and
trends
created in their
surroundings
. The previous statement raised a question, “why do
people
should care about it? ”. Perhaps they are lack of self-esteem and confidence which
make
them afraid to be not
accepted
by the
society
.
Therefore
they
follow
the
trends
and standards.

III. DISCUSSIONS

The
evidences
of the manual Do Android Dream of Electric Sheep?
and
Indonesian news provided in the findings section has its correlations. The
evidences
lead to hypothesis that
people
nowadays
and
society
described
in the Philip’s
book
use
luxurious
animals
and
goods
to measure their
social
ranks
.
Therefore
they compete and willing to do anything for it, even families.
However
, the question is why they should do it?
.
In the
novel
, Rick
Deckard
’s
behaviours
confirms that he is selfish and greedy for
animals
with expensive price
just
to impress his
neighbours
.
Hence
, he killed the Nexus-6 androids in
order
to
afford
a
real
animal
. It is
clearly
indicated that Rick
Deckard
does not care how can he
afford
his desirable pet, what matter is to
buy
it as form the
social
standpoint it
has to
be done
. It means that Rick
Deckard
indeed
attempts to
follow
the
standards
in his society.

Over here in Indonesia we can
see
the same points as written in the Philip
Dick’s
book
, it is about the consumerism and
competition
in the
community
. There is considerable
celebrities
,
socialites
and
elites
who
have a desire of
owning
fancy
things and
exotic
pets
(Pasha, 2019). This
is proven
by the news and references provided in the finding session whereby there is a
trend
and
social
standard
created among them to possess
luxurious
stuff and
pets
.
For instance
, Marion
Jola
, singer
who
recognized that she ever
bought
a
branded
bag
because
of her sense of prestige as there is a
community
standard
of
owning
luxurious
things from her
surroundings
. The
other
one is a
socialite
who
stole a Luis Vuitton handbag as her
surroundings
have
branded
bag
as the
social
standard
(Beers, 2020).
Furthermore
, the
trend
of
owning
an
exotic
pet within the
celebrities
and
elite
groups. It can
be noted
from the YouTube channel of several
celebrities
.
For example
,
mass
media
and the YouTube channel that exhibit
Irfan
Hakim
’s
exotic
pet,
Aldabra
tortoise,
Alshad
Ahmad’s Bengal tiger,
Raditya
Dika
’s
Sphynx
cat, and
so
much more (Pasha, 2019). This asserts the correlation between the concept of consumerism in the
book
and Indonesian
society
whereby
people’s
envy
feeling
and prestige resulted them to
follow
the
trends
and
social
standards
in
order
to their
social
ranks
even though
in fact they do not
really
need it.

In conclusion
,
people
's lifestyle
nowadays
is
extremely
influential by the
mass
media
,
trends
and
social
standard
.
Many
of their
lives
with the
idea
of consumerism as they have an
envy
feeling
towards the others. They are obsessing of
fancy
things and
exotic
animals
, they will not feel
good
if they did not have it and it is
hard
for them to
be satisfied
with all that they have. This
show
how greedy
people
are
just
to impress the public.
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