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Why do people do volunteer work?

Why do people do volunteer work? 86O2P
One of the clearer reasons why people volunteer is because they find something that they are passionate about and want to do something good for others. Because it is a joy, "to give is to last. " Volunteering is a great way to help people who are less fortunate than you. There are people who have fun, there are those who do it because they feel for another person's plight, or there are those who give to charity for no reason at all, just to help. But all they did was a good thing. Volunteers believe that some of the happiest people in the world are those who help to bring happiness to others
One of the clearer reasons why
people
volunteer is
because
they find something that they are passionate about and want to do something
good
for others.
Because
it is a joy,
"
to give is to last.
"
Volunteering is a great way to
help
people
who
are less fortunate than you. There are
people
who
have fun, there are those
who
do it
because
they feel for another person's plight, or there are those
who
give to charity for no reason at all,
just
to
help
.
But
all they did
was
a
good
thing. Volunteers believe that
some
of the happiest
people
in the world are those
who
help
to bring happiness to
others
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IELTS essay Why do people do volunteer work?

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