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Why do choose to study your first foreign language at Ulis? And what are the difficulties in learning two foreign languages at the same time?

Why do choose to study your first foreign language at Ulis? And what are the difficulties in learning two foreign languages at the same time? dknld
Many people believe that learning two foreign languages would bring them many benefits for their works in the future. However, they still create major other issues, learning these at the same time, especially. From my own experience learning two foreign languages at the same time, in this essay, I will discuss what problems that could happen when learning two languages at the same time. It is true that one obvious advantage of learning two foreign languages at the same time could be saving time when learning a language, to some extent. However, this would probably cause a huge limitation for learners, which is confusion, dysarthria between two languages being studied at the same time. As a result, those who learn two languages in such a way, may not seem to have a firm grasp of the knowledge of one language. According to New York Times report, in recent years, there is a number of people, higher than 70%, who decide to learn two languages at the same time, however, their success rate is very low. Moreover,
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IELTS essay Why do choose to study your first foreign language at Ulis? And what are the difficulties in learning two foreign languages at the same time?

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