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Talk about your time and what to do.

Talk about your time and what to do. 75Kpb
Yesterday i had an intense headache because if the pressure of studying. However, i am trying to keep my chain up by eating healthy food and drinks, furthermore, avoiding junck meals is really good step on the way to health crises. İn addition, doing excersies is quite appropriate to get into shape and keep in good health. Finally, good news are coming inshaallah and my work is somewhat ensured and no need to worry about it. Overall, my exam is closer that i has been ever, so keep up with studying.
Yesterday
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i
had an intense headache
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because
if the pressure of studying.
However
,
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i
am trying to
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keep
my chain up by eating healthy food and drinks,
furthermore
, avoiding
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junck
meals is
really
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good
step on the way to health crises.
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İn
addition, doing
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excersies
is quite appropriate to g
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et
into shape and k
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eep
in g
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ood
health. F
inally,
g
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ood
news are coming
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inshaallah
and my work is somewhat ensured and no need to worry about it. O
verall,
my exam is closer that
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i
has been ever, s
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o
k
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eep
up with studying.

IELTS essay Talk about your time and what to do.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
91 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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