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International relations essay

International relations essay 66kKG

Withstanding the fact that the transitional period of WWII impact many countries around the world, the political tension emerged in two Asian nations including Vietnam and South Korea. International relations, therefore, seek to study why certain behaviour can led to dilemma as well as to speculate actions of adversary. This paper main objective is to explore liberalism and socialism in the context of Vietnam in particular. Additionally, this essay will make a differentiation between these school of thought and will subsequently offering a summarised of linkage between Vietnam and liberalism. More importantly, this literature will also examine limitations of both ideologies.

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IELTS essay International relations essay

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American English

2 paragraphs

101 words

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