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Merits and demerits of mobile phone

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As we can see that mobile phone is necessary thing about of our day to day life. They play important role in education in form of informative technology. The most useful thing about it it was we can communicate in many country. The meris are they are most usefull thing but on the other hand they are as destructive as fireworks. People now offetn use mobile and taking advantage of developind technology. As we can understand everything in universe has some positive and negative nature same condition with smartphones. Children are nowerdays more attracted towards mobile loosing their childhood. Most of teenegers are busy in smartphone. For example nowerdays an market holding game named pubg on every smartphone used by teenages. Suprisingly thing about the gadget is AI(artificial intelligence). On commanded by voice they performe all cericullum activity. In conclusion everything has merit and demerit in the world of human.
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mobile and taking advantage of
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nature same condition with smartphones. Children are
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more attracted towards mobile loosing their childhood. Most of
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teenegers
are busy in smartphone.

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market holding game named
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pubg
on every smartphone
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In conclusion
everything has merit and demerit in the world of human.
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IELTS essay Merits and demerits of mobile phone

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
150 words
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