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Why cars are important in Rohingya crisis management?

Why cars are important in Rohingya crisis management? 8Gr6P
Importance of car in Rohingya crisis management: In late August 2017, the international humanitarian community launched a massive emergency operation in Bangladesh to assist hundreds of thousands of Rohingya refugees crossing the border from Rakhine State in Myanmar, fleeing the brutal violence of large-scale ethnic cleansing by Myanmar security forces. In total there are 35 camps which are situated in Ukhiya and Teknaf area. Total 48 officers are working under RRRC office in different capacities which includes officers in Bhasanchar, camp in charges, etc. UNHCR provides vehicles for the deployment of the government counterparts such as Refugee Refugee Relief and Repatriation Commissioner, district administration, fire service, and police in Cox’s Bazar and UNHCR and partners to meet emergency needs amid the influx of Rohingyas into Bangladesh from Myanmar. 1. The farthest camp from cox’s bazar is situated approximately 6o km away from the RRRC Office. The jeeps and pickups are used for ensuring safe and quick movement of the officers to the camp areas. 2. There are 20 Jeeps constantly providing services to officers from MoFA, MoDMR, and other ministries in time of official visit made to camps at Cox’s Bazar. 3. Some officers stay in the hub (situated near the camp area) and registered camps to respond quickly in any odd law and order situation and other officers go to camp offices from cox’s Bazar. In both cases, cars are not only important for officers quick movement but also for securing safety. Moreover, various important amenities like medicines and other important materials are sent to camps by using these cars. 4. The car provided by UNHCR includes 5 ambulances which are functioning in NYP, KTP, Teknaf, and RRRC Office. These ambulances play a vital role in transporting Rohingya patients in case of emergency while referred to specific healthcare facilities. 5. There is poor and insufficient vehicle access due to FDMN settlements and narrower roads in some parts of the camp areas where the camp in charges and CiC office staff uses motorcycles to reach that part of camps.
Importance of
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in Rohingya crisis management:

In late August 2017, the international humanitarian community launched a massive emergency operation in Bangladesh to assist hundreds of thousands of Rohingya refugees crossing the border from Rakhine State in Myanmar, fleeing the brutal violence of large-scale ethnic cleansing by Myanmar security forces. In total there are 35 camps which
are situated
in
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Ukhiya
and
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Teknaf
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area
. Total 48
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officers
are working under
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RRRC
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office
in
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different
capacities which includes
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officers
in
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Bhasanchar
, camp in charges, etc.

UNHCR provides vehicles for the deployment of the
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government
counterparts such as
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Refugee Refugee
Relief and Repatriation Commissioner, district administration, fire service, and police in Cox’s
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Bazar
and UNHCR and partners to
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meet
emergency needs amid the influx of Rohingyas into Bangladesh from Myanmar.

1. The farthest camp from cox’s
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bazar
is situated
approximately 6o km away from the
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RRRC
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Office
. The jeeps and pickups are
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used
for ensuring safe and quick movement of the
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officers
to the camp
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areas. 2
. There are 20 Jeeps
constantly
providing services to
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officers
from
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MoFA
,
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MoDMR
, and other ministries in time of official visit made to camps at Cox’s
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Bazar
.

3.
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Some
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officers
stay in the hub (situated near the camp
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area)
and registered camps to respond
quickly
in any odd law and order situation and other
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officers
go to camp
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offices
from cox’s
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Bazar
. In both cases,
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cars
are not
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only
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important
for
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officers
quick movement
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but
also
for securing safety.
Moreover
, various
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important
amenities like medicines and other
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important
materials are
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sent
to camps by using these
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cars. 4
. The
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car
provided by UNHCR includes 5 ambulances which are functioning in
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NYP
, KTP,
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Teknaf
, and
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RRRC
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Office
. These ambulances play a vital role in transporting Rohingya patients in case of emergency while referred to specific healthcare facilities.

5. There is poor and insufficient vehicle access due to
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FDMN
settlements and narrower roads in
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some
parts of the camp
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areas
where the camp in charges and
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CiC
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office
staff
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uses
motorcycles to reach that part of camps.
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IELTS essay Why cars are important in Rohingya crisis management?

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339 words
5.5
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