Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

why adults decide to study? describing information shown below.

why adults decide to study? describing information shown below. Xy26w
Education is an essential part of each person’s life that could pave the way for picking up an appropriate job. Education is not only important for children at the young age, but also undeniable for adults. In this essay, we will investigate why adults decide to study and what motivates them to study. According to statistics, the majority of adults encouraged to educate due to their interests in that subject. Therefore, interest is the first reason. Secondly, gaining qualifications for picking up a new career is a significant point for learning. These qualifications guide people to suitable races, according to their favorites. Another proofs could be meeting new people, able to change the job, and etc. To take these courses, people choose alternative ways to pay their costs. Most of them prefer to pay individual that includes 40 percent people. 35 percent includes the taxpayers and 35 percent are employers. To sum up, education could be a useful step to explore a perfect career and improve job’s position by learning novel technics and science.
Education is an essential part of each person’s life that could pave the way for picking up an appropriate job. Education is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for children at the young age,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
undeniable for adults. In this essay, we will investigate why adults decide to study and what motivates them to study.

According to statistics, the majority of adults encouraged to educate due to their interests in that subject.
Therefore
, interest is the
first
reason.
Secondly
, gaining qualifications for picking up a new career is a significant point for learning. These qualifications guide
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to suitable races, according to their favorites. Another proofs could be meeting new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
, able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the job,
Write the name of the item after 'and' or use only "etc".
and etc
.

To take these courses,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
choose alternative ways to pay their costs. Most of them prefer to pay individual that includes 40 percent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. 35 percent includes the taxpayers and 35 percent are employers.

To sum up, education could be a useful step to explore a perfect career and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
job’s position by learning novel
Possible spelling mistake found.
technics
and science.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay why adults decide to study? describing information shown below.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
174 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6band
    some schools teach science and math in English. Write an essay about it
    It is often argued that it is more advantages to choose teaching subjects in English instead of Arabic language. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that teach these subjects which are math and science is better using original language. First of all, I believe that teaching in mother ...
  • 5band
    why do we need music? write at least 250 words.
    Music has been always a vital part of human’s life. In the other hand, this art has always affected on all aspects of our lives, undoubtedly. In our modern world, we have different type of music for alternative references. We want to probe these types and also, find out why we need music and what ar...
  • 6band
    English Spanish become more popular than other discuss
    There is no doubt that these days, some languages such as English, Spanish and Madrid become more widely in worldwide. In question, Are some languages extremely important than others and many minority languages become die? In this essay, I am going to discuss these views and draw my own opinion. In...
  • 6band
    why music is needed? explain your idea.
    Music has been always a vital part of human’s life. In the other hand, this art has always affected on all aspects of our lives, undoubtedly. In our modern world, we have different type of music for alternative references. We want to probe these types and also, find out why we need music and what ar...
  • 5band
    (The 2 most significant issuses are internet connection and technological equipment)
    There are numerous challenges that people who work from home must face, such as network overload and old devices that have contributed to interruptions in their work. According to a Vietnamnews article, Internet connections are slow due to problems with undersea cables. On Sunday, AAG encountered a...
  • 5band
    The best way to deal with the growing number of overweight teenagers is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum.
    More and more people are getting overweight at a young age. Therefore, in my opinion, introducing more physical education lessons in the school curriculum is necessary. Doing sports is the easiest yet the most effective way to deal with the growing number of overweight teenagers. First, it can impr...