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Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this. wj7d
Media is considered to be the fourth pilar of a democratic country. it play a significance role in awareness of general people. However, whoever controls the media also control the opinions as well as attitude of the people on a particular situation and there is little can bedone to rectify this which are need to I be pondered upon. According to my perception, I strongly believe - that the whoever controls the media, control 70% opinions and attitude of the - people and it should be rectify by taking required measures. Primarily, a media should always support the truth and reflects all the details as it is they I gathered from there sources to the people which in present era is neglect. The person behind the whole channel has all the rights to mould the news in his own wish. Therefore many politician bribe the owners of the channal to telecastall the news in favour of them. On the contrary, it is too difficult to rectify all the unfear practice immediately but the government should take some little step to rectify it. However, people also try to avoid totally believing in media as it reflect only the opinion of one person. Whereas, government should pass some laws against the dirty practices. In the epilogue, the show the fear news as they has a huge responsibility of delivering the accurate news to the people on time.
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Media
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considered to be the fourth
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pilar
of a democratic country.
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it
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play
a significance role in awareness of general
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people
.
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, whoever
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controls
the
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media
also
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control
the opinions
as well
as attitude of the
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people
on a particular situation and there is
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little
can
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bedone
to
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rectify
this which
are need
to I
be pondered
upon.

According to my perception, I
strongly
believe
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-
that the whoever
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controls
the
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media
,
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control
70% opinions and attitude of the
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-
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people
and it should be
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rectify
by taking required measures.
Primarily
, a
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media
should always support the truth and reflects all the
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details
as it is they I gathered from there sources to the
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people
which in present era is neglect. The person behind the whole channel has all the rights to
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mould
the
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news
in his
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own
wish.
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Therefore
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many
politician bribe the owners of the
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channal
to
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telecastall
the
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news
in
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favour
of them.

On the contrary
, it is too difficult to
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rectify
all the
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unfear
practice immediately
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but
the
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government
should take
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some
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little
step to
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rectify
it.
However
,
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people
also
try to avoid
totally
believing in
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media
as it
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reflect
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only
the opinion of one person.
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Whereas
,
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government
should pass
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some
laws against the dirty practices.

In the epilogue, the
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show
the fear
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news
as they
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has
a huge responsibility of delivering the accurate
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news
to the
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people
on time.
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IELTS essay Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
235 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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