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Some people think that there are benefits in going to private secondary schools.other feel that private school can have negative effects on the society as a whole.discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people think that there are benefits in going to private secondary schools. other feel that private school can have negative effects on the society as a whole. discuss both views and give your opinion Nkwg

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