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Who is your favourite person?

Who is your favourite person? RVjDW
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Introduction A Ben's superhero a daughter's
first
I
love
father
are
unequivocally
the most
Important
person in an individual's life.
from
teaching them how to speak to
Juning
after their bicycle preventing their fall,
"
to sharing their wisdom and being teacher of greater thing in life.
a the
father
is prodigious,
owinning
different


Importance of
father
:
everying
thing fore me.
.
out
him even I
can't I
thought
about that. And my dad's
different
place my person in My
father
verry
happiests
1 Kind Soul, he's always
thought
about his
Jamily
Rescild
of my dad
because
my
superhere
. My dad.
all
time every place
spoket
me. stand for me. I
wlothing
, be
teachels
!
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IELTS essay Who is your favourite person?

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
113 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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