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You're going to write a blog post about how busy you are at the moment.

You're going to write a blog post about how busy you are at the moment. KybA9
I don’t have any free time, my schedule is full. I’m an enthusiastic person and have a sense of work hard. Hence, I’m frequently busy six days a week and have a day off. I think this is ok, I’m fine with this timetable. Last week, I had a lot of free time because I just finished an important exam. I spent a lot of time improving my English listening skills. Besides, I found more English documents and assignments for myself. Furthermore, I had an adorable time with my team Leader Student. We had many games that helped connect people together. This week, I am joining the talk show “Challenge Yourself Do You Dare” with a guest who is Khanh Vy. I’m looking forward to meeting her. After that, I am going to do assignments and learn to cook some dishes on the weekend. Finally, next week, I am coming to my old school to take my documents. Besides, I will do exercise to raise my health. In conclusion, although I am almost fine with that. I hope I have a lot of free time to myself so that I am relaxed and spend much time with my family.
I don’t have any free
time
, my schedule is full. I’m an enthusiastic person and have a sense of work
hard
.
Hence
, I’m
frequently
busy six days a
week
and have a day off. I
think
this is ok, I’m fine with this timetable.

Last
week
, I had
a lot of
free
time
because
I
just
finished an
important
exam. I spent
a lot of
time
improving my English listening
skills
.
Besides
, I found more English documents and assignments for myself.
Furthermore
, I had an adorable
time
with my team Leader Student. We had
many
games that
helped
connect
people
together.

This
week
, I am joining the talk
show
“Challenge Yourself Do You Dare” with a guest who is
Khanh
Vy
. I’m looking forward to meeting her. After that, I am going to do assignments and learn to cook
some
dishes on the weekend.
Finally
,
next
week
, I am coming to my
old
school to take my documents.
Besides
, I will do exercise to raise my health.

In conclusion
, although I am almost fine with that. I hope I have
a lot of
free
time
to myself
so
that I
am relaxed
and spend much
time
with my family.
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IELTS essay You're going to write a blog post about how busy you are at the moment.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
199 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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