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In this day and age, smoking is causing a number of pressing problems for our health. The first thing to put into consideration is that smoking damages nearly every organ in the body. To be more explicit, cigarette smoke contains over 4000 chemicals, of which 43 are known to cause diseases to our body, the most dangerous are tar, nicotine and addictive substances. Furthermore, around 8 million people die prematurely each year as a result of tobacco use, according to the World Health Organization and the Institute For Health Metrics and Evaluation. Second, smoking also affects other people's health negatively. Infact, smoking will harm the surrounding environment at least 4 times more than the smoker himself absorbs. To fortify further, statistics illustrate that passive smokers increase their risk of heart disease by 10%, lung disease by 25%, and stroke risk by 82%. In conclusion, smoking is detrimental for our health based on the aforementioned reasons.

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