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Who is people that inspire you the most?

Who is people that inspire you the most? 1nVen
If talking about inspiring people, I would say that it’s Salesian’s. Because I was taken care of by them since my father passed away when I was four years old at that time. So it seemed like I spent most of my living life with them till I finished my high school. Apart from that, I learned so many valuable things about how to become a good person like helping people who are in need, use wisely the time and always put God at the center of my life. And I am very happy now because with I can help some residences who are in need and also my college that I went to with the small amount that I have. Once mother Teresa said it’s not about how much you give but how much love you put into giving. This makes me become even more stronger to doing good continuously no matter who the people are and where they come from.
If talking about inspiring
people
, I would say that it’s
Salesian
’s.
Because
I
was taken
care of by them since my father passed away when I was four years
old
at that time.
So
it seemed like I spent most of my living life with them till I finished my high school. Apart from that, I learned
so
many
valuable things about how to become a
good
person like helping
people
who are in need,
use
wisely
the time and always put God at the center of my life.

And I am
very
happy
now
because
with I can
help
some
residences who are in need and
also
my college that I went to with the
small
amount that I have.

Once
mother Teresa
said it’s not about how much you give
but
how much
love
you put into giving. This
makes
me become even
more stronger
to doing
good
continuously
no matter who the
people
are and where they
come
from.
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IELTS essay Who is people that inspire you the most?

Essay
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3 paragraphs
162 words
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