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In this essay, I will offer some recommendations for lowering meat intake on a regular basis, as well as some difficulties that may arise as a result of these answers.

In this essay, I will offer some recommendations for lowering meat intake on a regular basis, as well as some difficulties that may arise as a result of these answers. 75LAA
It has been observed that meat production comparatively use more land than production of crops. That is why some people are in the favour to reduce meat consumption, as enough land is not available to support its production. This essay will discuss how can we reduce meat ingestion and utilization, as well as, explain the effects of the measures taken. Due to increase in the world population, the land used for cultivation and animal rearing has been decreased considerably. But it has been said that crop production takes less land than production of meat. To minimize the use of already available land, it is better idea to decrease the meat production. It can be done by decreasing animal farm rearing. For instance, it was reported in one of the studies that it takes hundreds of gallons of water and animal feed to produce a small steak. Moreover, the number of slaughter houses can be decreased in order to produce less meat. Furthermore, a state supported vegan compaign can be run to raise awareness among people about the bad impact of meat consumption on health, such as hypertension, hypercholestremia and so on. This may help in changing people mindset about the ingestion of meat. As there will be less number of people to eat meat, its production may fall eventually. Thus, the implementation of these measures can help in reduction of producing meat. However, it can also have some bad impact on people. As in some part of the world, such as drylands and deserts, people completely rely on animals for food. If they are not allowed to breed these animals, they may die of hunger. In addition, it has been reported that certain vitamins can only be find in animal meat, such as vitamin B12. If people stop eating meat altogether, it can create its deficiency, which can lead to anemia. Moreover, those people, who work in the field of meat production and animal rearing, may lose their jobs, which can affect them financially. In short, these are the problems which can arise, if such measures are taken. To conclude, due to global land scarcity, it is better idea to decrease meat production. It can be done by decreasing the number of animal farms, slaughter houses and promoting vegan movement but such measures can cause several problems, such as food scarcity, vitamin B12 deficiency and loss of jobs.
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been observed
that
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meat
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production
comparatively
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use
more
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land
than
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production
of crops.
That is
why
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some
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people
are in the
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favour
to
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reduce
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meat
consumption, as
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enough
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land
is not available to support its
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production
. This essay will discuss how can we
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reduce
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meat
ingestion and utilization,
as well
as,
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explain
the effects of the
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measures
taken.

Due to increase in the world population, the
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land
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used
for cultivation and
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animal
rearing has
been decreased
considerably
.
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But
it has
been said
that crop
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production
takes less
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land
than
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production
of
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meat
. To minimize the
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use
of already available
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land
, it is better
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idea
to decrease the
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meat
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production
. It can
be done
by decreasing
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animal
farm rearing.
For instance
, it
was reported
in one of the studies that it takes hundreds of gallons of water and
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animal
feed to produce a
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small
steak.
Moreover
, the number of slaughter
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houses
can
be decreased
in order to produce less
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meat
.
Furthermore
, a state supported vegan
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compaign
can
be run
to raise awareness among
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people
about the
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bad
impact of
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meat
consumption on health, such as hypertension,
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hypercholestremia
and
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so
on. This may
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help
in changing
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people
mindset about the ingestion of
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meat
. As there will be less number of
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people
to eat
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meat
, its
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production
may fall
eventually
.
Thus
, the implementation of these
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measures
can
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help
in reduction of producing meat.

However
, it can
also
have
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some
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bad
impact on
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people
. As in
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some
part of the world, such as
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drylands
and deserts,
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people
completely rely on
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animals
for food. If they are not
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allowed
to breed these
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animals
, they may
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die
of hunger.
In addition
, it has
been reported
that certain vitamins can
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only
be
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find
in
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animal
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meat
, such as vitamin B12. If
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people
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stop
eating
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meat
altogether, it can create its deficiency, which can lead to anemia.
Moreover
, those
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people
, who work in the field of
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meat
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production
and
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animal
rearing, may lose their jobs, which can affect them
financially
. In short, these are the problems which can arise, if such
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measures
are taken
.

To conclude
, due to global
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land
scarcity, it is better
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idea
to decrease
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meat
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production
. It can
be done
by decreasing the number of
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animal
farms, slaughter
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houses
and promoting vegan movement
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but
such
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measures
can cause several problems, such as food scarcity, vitamin B12 deficiency and loss of jobs.
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IELTS essay In this essay, I will offer some recommendations for lowering meat intake on a regular basis, as well as some difficulties that may arise as a result of these answers.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
398 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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