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whis sons of the educator only vecpodature fler Teat to learners and People thought the to judge them albeut right and good desicione bed the believe that educator Only Teach Learnow about academ subjects. this essay will dismiss both the Points of new in detail before Presenting the final opinion there are some People who are in th favour of the senile new statement that the Teachers are responsib to teach the students desut their behaviour. People admit that the teacher Plays du important role in student life. Becauseſtud since they spend their movimient time in the glahore. Par example In this time parents does not have time fou their childrens to teach something in a betwee way but a Gerners to classfellow JL5Va
whis sons of the educator only vecpodature fler Teat to learners and People thought the to judge them albeut right and good desicione bed the believe that educator Only Teach Learnow about academ subjects. this essay will dismiss both the Points of new in detail before Presenting the final opinion there are some People who are in th favour of the senile new statement that the Teachers are responsib to teach the students desut their behaviour. People admit that the teacher Plays du important role in student life. Becauseſtud since they spend their movimient time in the glahore. Par example In this time parents does not have time fou their childrens to teach something in a betwee way but a Gerners to classfellow
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IELTS essay whis sons of the educator only vecpodature fler Teat to learners and People thought the to judge them albeut right and good desicione bed the believe that educator Only Teach Learnow about academ subjects. this essay will dismiss both the Points of new in detail before Presenting the final opinion there are some People who are in th favour of the senile new statement that the Teachers are responsib to teach the students desut their behaviour. People admit that the teacher Plays du important role in student life. Becauseſtud since they spend their movimient time in the glahore. Par example In this time parents does not have time fou their childrens to teach something in a betwee way but a Gerners to classfellow

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  American English
10 paragraphs
122 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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