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Nowadays, all parents tend to care their children’s education especially which relates alien speech. It is an inescapable fact that twentieth century demands high knowledge and more than one language.

Nowadays, all parents tend to care their children’s education especially which relates alien speech. It is an inescapable fact that twentieth century demands high knowledge and more than one language. NVL3j
The main point would tend to be ability to learn new skills. Youngsters with between 0-12 years old are in active stage of biology. At that time children can acquire a knowledge of many kinds of things such as new words, songs, wide range of pronunciation. Researchers study the relation between children and environment where linked another language that could lead to be native speaker depends on amazing memory. The next subcategory of babies’ skill is the power of their brain. To learning another language expands right and left cerebrum. Also young ages can be receive faster than adults. A final one of significant point is adaptation potential this happens when children learn foreign language they try to gain cultures and patterns of the one. Even so, to studying another speech might be have disadvantages such as inaccurate pronunciation, talk to mix up language that child learn. However, personal expertise which contains additional language can be advantage today. To summarize, it seems that foreign speech is the main part of education level that can express individual characteristic. Also, it will be guarantee of children life.
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skills
. Youngsters with between 0-12 years
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old
are in active stage of biology. At that time
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children
can acquire a knowledge of
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many
kinds of things such as new words, songs, wide range of pronunciation. Researchers study the relation between
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children
and environment where linked another
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language
that could lead to be native speaker depends on amazing memory. The
next
subcategory of babies’
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skill
is the power of their brain. To learning another
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language
expands right and
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left
cerebrum.
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Also
young ages can be
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receive
faster than adults. A final one of significant point is adaptation potential this happens when
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children
learn foreign
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language
they try to gain cultures and patterns of the one.

Even
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so
, to studying another speech might be
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have
disadvantages such as inaccurate pronunciation, talk to mix up
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language
The verb 'learn' is plural. Did you mean: "that child learns"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?
that child learn
.
However
, personal expertise which contains additional
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language
can be advantage
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today
.

To summarize
, it seems that foreign speech is the main part of education level that can express individual characteristic.
Also
, it will be
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guarantee
of
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children
life.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, all parents tend to care their children’s education especially which relates alien speech. It is an inescapable fact that twentieth century demands high knowledge and more than one language.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
185 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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