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While some think family run business is the best way to run it , others think Family run business is problematic. What is your opinion.

While some think family run business is the best way to run it, others think Family run business is problematic. What is your opinion. 3a06m
It is a well known fact that the success of a company, or lack thereof depends on the members of the organization. While some are of the opinion that successful businesses are able to achieve such results due to family members owning and running the business, others argue such an endeavour could be problematic. I agree with the former opinion, and in this essay I will highlight my reasons for doing so. A family run business has certain decided advantages. Firstly, it is natural such a business will be constructed on a foundation of shared values and dreams. Due to this common vision, family members are more likely to undertake different roles and assignments in order to meet project deadlines and finish a job well to uphold the name of the organization. This level of dedication is hard to find and even harder to replicate in other multinational corporations, where most employees are less likely to shoulder such additional responsibilities. This results in a cohesive workforce unit, where members work in a coordinated and dedicated manner allowing the company to progress and develop increased work-related opportunities. Secondly, family run business have a number of their own kin as members of the board. This unified leadership allows room to not only promote solidarity, but also improve trust and authenticity among employees. For instance, decisions pertaining a certain business deal will be met with logical reasoning and any ethical dilemma will be weighed against its benefits, to allow for the best possible outcome, which will make both the leaders, as well as the followers happy. Such a foresight will result in leadership longevity. Moreover, this authentic behavior will allow for workers to formulate and implement better ideas, which would improve clientele satisfaction, and increase the investment returns by these clients. To conclude, I believe that the benefits of a family run business, such as an agreement of upholding a certain code of moral conduct and a shared foresight of future endeavors, along with the subsequent self reliance, allows for a company that is not only ethical, but also successful
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company
, or lack thereof depends on the
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members
of the organization. While
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some
are of the opinion that successful
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businesses
are able to achieve such results due to
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family
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members
owning and running the
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business
, others argue such an
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endeavour
could be problematic. I
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agree
with the former opinion, and in this essay I will highlight my reasons for doing
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.

A
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run
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has certain decided advantages.
Firstly
, it is natural such a
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business
will
be constructed
on a foundation of shared values and dreams. Due to this common vision,
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family
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members
are more likely to undertake
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different
roles and assignments in order to
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meet
project deadlines and finish a job well to uphold the name of the organization. This level of dedication is
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hard
to find and even harder to replicate in other multinational corporations, where most employees are less likely to shoulder such additional responsibilities. This results in a cohesive workforce unit, where
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members
work in a coordinated and dedicated manner allowing the
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company
to progress and develop increased work-related opportunities.

Secondly
,
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family
run
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business
have a number of their
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own
kin as
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members
of the board. This unified leadership
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allows
room to not
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only
promote solidarity,
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also
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improve
trust and authenticity among employees.
For instance
, decisions pertaining a certain
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business
deal will
be met
with logical reasoning and any ethical dilemma will
be weighed
against its benefits, to
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allow
for the best possible outcome, which will
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make
both the leaders,
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as well as
the followers happy. Such a foresight will result in leadership longevity.
Moreover
, this authentic behavior will
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allow
for workers to formulate and implement better
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ideas
, which would
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improve
clientele satisfaction, and increase the investment returns by these clients.

To conclude
, I believe that the benefits of a
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family
run
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business
, such as an agreement of upholding a certain code of moral conduct and a shared foresight of future endeavors, along with the subsequent
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self reliance
,
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allows
for a
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company
that is
not
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only
ethical,
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also
successful

IELTS essay While some think family run business is the best way to run it, others think Family run business is problematic. What is your opinion.

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4 paragraphs
346 words
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