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How being different has impacted your life Write an essay of at least 250 words about your own experience is different and how it has both positively and negatively impacted your life.

How being different has impacted your life Write an essay of at least 250 words about your own experience is different and how it has both positively and negatively impacted your life. MMq2a

Everyone in the world tries to blend in with each other and not to stand out because if you do, you might get bullied, or maybe you could be loved by people. This essay will argue about the influence of being dissimilar from others in life. In my whole life, I’ve never been that different from others (maybe it is a natural instinct for people to try not to stand out). Now that I think about it, the only thing I’m different from others is that I’m one year younger than my classmates. I think it's become both advantages and disadvantages too. On the one hand, I’ve never worried about getting too old and getting a gap year. Many of my classmates are 2 years older than me and they always concern about their maturity. I’m glad that I don’t need to depress by that. Furthermore, getting in school as a youth helped me to become more independent from my parents. On the other hand, in some competitions, kids should divide by age, and every time it happens I cannot team with my friends. Moreover, in some olympiads, the examiner asks about why my age is younger than others, and because of that reason, I couldn’t attend them. In conclusion, being different can affect life either way. But the one who decides which way is me by myself. If I think being young is cooler, then it is cool. If I think it is inopportune, then it will be like that.

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because
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get
 bullied, or maybe you could be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. This essay will argue about the influence of being dissimilar from others in life.

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different
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Now
 that I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withguessconsiderfeelassumeseeunderstand
think
 about it, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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different
 from others is that I’m one year younger than my classmates. I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withguessconsiderfeelassumeseeunderstand
think
 it's become both advantages and disadvantages too.

On the one hand, I’ve never worried about getting too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and getting a gap year. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
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 of my classmates are 2 years older than Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).me, and
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 they always concern about their maturity. I’m glad that I don’t need to depress by that. Furthermore
, getting in school as a youth This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 me to become more The usual collocation for "independent" is "of" not "from". Did you mean "independent of"?independent of
independent from
 my parents.

On the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 hand, in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 competitions, kids should divide by age, and every time it happens I cannot team with my friends. Moreover
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some
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, the examiner asks about why my age is younger than others, and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of that reason, I couldn’t attend them.

In conclusion
, being This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 can affect life either way. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 the one who decides which way is me by myself. If I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withguessconsiderfeelassumeseeunderstand
think
 being young is cooler, then it is cool. If I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withguessconsiderfeelassumeseeunderstand
think
 it is inopportune, then it will be like that. 