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while some people prefer to live in apartments, other do not think an apartment is suitable form of accommodation.

while some people prefer to live in apartments, other do not think an apartment is suitable form of accommodation. k5Vne
I consider some population choose for staying at room, others do not reckon an room is a proper shape of housing. in this essay i am going to deduce advantages and disadvantages of this issue and present my view in favor of some people stay in housing. From the one side, staying in housing brings many benefits. First of all, some people wil get a better lifestyle. I think it would be good for society because some population are going to obtain facilities that allow they to do many things like sports, and shoping mals. Second of all, some people survive in housing will acquire easy treatment. For instance, any damage like leaking pipes and a cracked wall, will be done by the landlord. Finally, if some people choose to live in housing they will have better benefits. i view it is great taking into consideration the fact that some population will feel better to survive in housing than they do not survive in housing. Another important aspect of this is that they also get good security when they stay in housing. For example, there are security cameras that control people inside and ouside of housing. From the other side, several population stay in housing can bring some negative. Society living in housing feel that rooms in apartments are very limited. For instance, society who survive in housing can not change the design of the room and expand the housing. To conclude, in my perspective that i would assist the decision of the society survive in housing in my community despite a few negative impact that could follow this perspective. I believe that society living in housing can have many posivite impact in improving their lifes style, they are going to obtain security and comfort as they survive in their housing.
I consider
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some
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population
choose for staying at
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room
, others do not reckon
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an
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room
is a proper shape of housing.
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in
this essay
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i
am going to deduce advantages and disadvantages of this issue and present my view in favor of
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some
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people
stay in housing. From the one side, staying in housing brings
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many
benefits.
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First of all
,
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some
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people
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wil
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get
a better lifestyle. I
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think
it would be
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good
for
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society
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because
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some
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population
are going to obtain facilities that
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allow
they to do
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many
things like sports, and
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shoping
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mals
. Second of all,
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some
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people
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survive
in housing will acquire easy treatment.
For instance
, any damage like leaking pipes and a cracked wall, will
be done
by the landlord.
Finally
, if
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some
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people
choose to
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live
in housing they will have better benefits.
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i
view it is great taking into consideration the fact that
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some
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population
will feel better to
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survive
in housing than they do not
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survive
in housing. Another
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important
aspect of this is that they
also
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get
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good
security when they stay in housing.
For example
, there are security cameras that control
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people
inside and
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ouside
of housing. From the other side, several
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population
stay in housing can bring
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some
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negative
.
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Society
living in housing feel that
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rooms
in apartments are
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very
limited.
For instance
,
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society
who
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survive
in housing can not
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change
the design of the
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room
and expand the housing.
To conclude
, in my perspective that
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i
would assist the decision of the
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society
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survive
in housing in my community despite a few
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negative
impact that could follow this perspective. I believe that
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society
living in housing can have
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many
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posivite
impact in improving their
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lifes
style, they are going to obtain security and comfort as they
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survive
in their housing.
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IELTS essay while some people prefer to live in apartments, other do not think an apartment is suitable form of accommodation.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
301 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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