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Others language Learn for foreign country

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In varuous nations around the world, every Nations has an own language where living as a strangers can cause massive Social problems also praeticad preblems. i agree with this statement and i will state the reasons. state the easens. Living a foreign country is betten way to know unKnown things and cultures. But, speaking is the main problems in a others country. Socializing is a part of our life, If anyone doesn’t speak in foreign nations like local people. then no one Cam broaden their socialness, As a result, their muteness can causes serious problems. for example, if someone doesn’t speak with others, then how local people know them, believe them, communicate them when needs. Another reason is behaviour, it’s the best way to get connect with local people, except speak they will never hope to communicate with others. On the other hand, practical problems also affect on Their Daily lives, for instance, if an indvidual works in a company, the people who were born in that country and live in a country might not respect and like Their behaviour also. and those people Doesn't know Their ritual traditions, As a result, they are behaving as they behave in Their state. In my Honest opinion, i strongly agree this this state. people who wants to live in a foreign country, they must learn essential language for themselves. To sum up. Living in a any country is good for visitors, this way they will obtain additional experience and widen their horizons, but first they needs to know basic knowledge such as foreign's tradition, languages, behaviour as well.
In
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varuous
nations around the world, every Nations has an
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own
language where living as
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a strangers
can cause massive Social
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problems
also
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praeticad
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preblems
.
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i
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agree
with this statement and
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i
will state the reasons.
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state
the
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easens
.

Living a foreign
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country
is
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betten
way to
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know
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unKnown
things and cultures.
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But
, speaking is the main
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problems
in
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a
others
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country
. Socializing is a part of our life, If anyone doesn’t speak in foreign nations like local
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people
.
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then
no one Cam broaden their
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socialness
,
As a result
, their muteness can
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causes
serious
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problems
.
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for
example, if someone doesn’t speak with others, then how local
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people
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know
them, believe them, communicate them when needs. Another reason is
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behaviour
, it’s the best way to
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get
connect with local
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people
, except speak they will never hope to communicate with others.

On the other hand
, practical
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problems
also
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affect
on Their Daily
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lives
,
for instance
, if an
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indvidual
works in a
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company
, the
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people
who
were born
in that
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country
and
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live
in a
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country
might not respect and like Their
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behaviour
also
.
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and
those
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people
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Doesn
't
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know
Their ritual traditions,
As a result
, they are behaving as they behave in Their state.

In my Honest opinion,
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i
strongly
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agree
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this this
state.
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people
who
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wants
to
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live
in a foreign
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country
, they
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must
learn essential language for themselves.

To sum up. Living in
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a
any
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country
is
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good
for visitors, this way they will obtain additional experience and widen their horizons,
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but
first
they
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needs
to
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know
basic knowledge such as foreign's tradition, languages,
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behaviour
as well
.
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IELTS essay Others language Learn for foreign country

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
266 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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