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People believe that government should provide free University education. To what extent do you agree or disagree

People believe that government should provide free University education. 06eDl
In contemporary world, it has become contentious issue among the masses whether tertiary education must be free pr not. Up to some extent I accord myself with this notion. Commencing with, albeit providing free education can enhance not only mammoth pressure on the authority but also impediment of financial crisis can be faced either by masses or legislation because monetory funds are limited and if judicial would liable to provide indoctrination without imposing fee then expenditures would be raised. Moreover, higher amount of tax might be paid by human beings for overcoming the issue of funds. As a result, inflation can be observed in the nation. On the paradoxical side, unequivocally, tertiary education can spoil the career of tremendous learner as authority will provide the free education then many students who are neither willing in academic nor want to pursue they will also join the institutes. A survey reported that in 2012 when ministry launched some free facilities then unwanted people also participated which become issue in further life.
In contemporary world, it has become contentious issue among the masses whether tertiary
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extent I accord myself with this notion.

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can enhance not
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mammoth pressure on the authority
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monetory
funds
are limited
and if judicial would liable to provide indoctrination without imposing fee then expenditures would
be raised
.
Moreover
, higher amount of tax might
be paid
by human beings for overcoming the issue of funds.
As a result
, inflation can
be observed
in the nation. On the paradoxical side,
unequivocally
, tertiary
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education
can spoil the career of tremendous learner as authority will provide the
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free
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education
then
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many
students who are neither willing in academic nor want to pursue they will
also
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join
the institutes. A survey reported that in 2012 when ministry launched
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some
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free
facilities then unwanted
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people
also
participated which become issue in
further
life.
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IELTS essay People believe that government should provide free University education.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
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