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Topic:- Money is needed for doing good of others. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.Give reason for your answer.

Topic: - Money is needed for doing good of others. Give reason for your answer. Vrxj3
Finances are one of the significant needs for doing good of needy beings. This is a fact, but it is not the case everytime. A simple help like carrying their luggage or making sleeping arrangements for needy people can do alot of great. Firstly, we know that money is a godly thing. It can buy any material on the planet. One can help deprived people with getting food, clothing and even accommodations to live, and all that by spending money. Also there are many organisations that involve huge financial donations like, melinda and gates foundation, Tata trusts, etc. This organizations help people-in-need, all around the world with health, shelter, employment, etc. If money is used in a proper and planned manner it can do wonders. Apart from this there is a scenario where there many things which can never be bought by money, but can be shared and can be given to others who are deprived. Education is one of the abstract and magical things found around the globe. One can allways share his knowledge and perspective to people around without spending any money. Other than this planting trees, donating blood, not wasting food and water, not littering, etc are some of the ways, where this activities directly or indirectly involves good of entire mankind. Lastly, The dissagreement to the fact that "Money is must to help someone", is very obvious. In general helping, making people smile, might not allways need money, high standards, but what is required is a nice, big heart.
Finances are one of the significant needs for doing
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good
of needy beings. This is a fact,
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but
it is not the case
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everytime
. A simple
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help
like carrying their luggage or making sleeping arrangements for needy
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people
can do
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alot
of great.

Firstly
, we know that
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money
is a
godly
thing. It can
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buy
any material on the planet. One can
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help
deprived
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people
with getting food, clothing and even accommodations to
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live
, and all that by spending
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money
.
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Also
there are
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many
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organisations
that
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involve


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huge
financial donations like,
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melinda
and gates foundation, Tata trusts, etc.
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This
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organizations
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help
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people
-in-need, all around the world with health, shelter, employment, etc. If
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money
is
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used
in a proper and planned manner it can do wonders.

Apart from this there is a scenario where there
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many
things which can never be
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bought
by
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money
,
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but
can
be shared
and can be
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given
to others who
are deprived
. Education is one of the abstract and magical things found around the globe. One can
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allways
share his knowledge and perspective to
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people
around without spending any
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money
. Other than this planting trees, donating blood, not wasting food and water, not littering, etc are
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some of the
ways, where
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this
activities
directly
or
indirectly
involves
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good
of entire mankind.

Lastly
, The
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dissagreement
to the fact that
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Money is
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must to
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help
someone
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"
, is
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very
obvious.
In general
helping, making
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people
smile, might not
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allways
need
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money
, high standards,
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but
what
is required
is a nice,
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big
heart.
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IELTS essay Topic: - Money is needed for doing good of others. Give reason for your answer.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
253 words
5.5
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