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which restaurant do you come if you have a child? Why?

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If I have a child, I will come to Pete's Pizzas. Nowadays, almost kids like junk food such as chicken, spaghetti, pizza, . . . Therefore, this restaurant is an ideal place for my child. Although eating a lot of pizza is not good, sometimes we can give our children what they like. This restaurant has 35 diferents kinds of pizza topping in order that we can have a lot of choices. Beside, everyone comes here for fun because of special kid's playground in here.
If I have a child, I will
come
to Pete's Pizzas. Nowadays, almost kids like junk food such as chicken, spaghetti, pizza
, .
.
.
Therefore
, this restaurant is an ideal place for my child. Although eating
a lot of
pizza is not
good
,
sometimes
we can give our children what they like. This restaurant has 35
diferents
kinds of pizza topping in order that we can have
a lot of
choices. Beside, everyone
comes
here for fun
because
of special kid's playground in here.
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IELTS essay which restaurant do you come if you have a child? Why?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
85 words
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