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which restaurant do you choose for your friend's birthday?

which restaurant do you choose for your friend's birthday? Y2eb5
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IELTS essay which restaurant do you choose for your friend's birthday?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
19 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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