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which restaurant do you choose for your family party? Why?

which restaurant do you choose for your family party? Why? gDPjL
i will choose The Roast for my family party. First, this restaurant has classical British foods with the best things so my family will have many choices when order foods. Next, we will have opputinities to taste various of foods in here because their dishes, wines are getting beter everday. Finally, the magnificent views from here can makes we relax, eat delicious foods and enjoy the momments together.
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will choose The Roast for my family party.
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, this restaurant has classical British
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Finally
, the magnificent views from here can
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IELTS essay which restaurant do you choose for your family party? Why?

Essay
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1 paragraphs
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