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Are there any pleasant places to relax in your home town?

Are there any pleasant places to relax in your home town? OgOok
Oh yes, as you know, Ben Tre is one of the countrysides of all Southern provinces in Vietnam. This site, visitors can go sightseeing several spectacular scenery of farms. A field there is covered by yellow in each harvest. It looks like a enormous carpet lasting to the sky leg. In additional, There are many birds flying on the sky, all of them set up a great picture in the afternoon. If you visited my city, I would lead you to there. You not only contemplate some views being poem, but also can swim in rivers nearby. That will be wonderful experiences you have once come to my home town.
Oh yes, as you know, Ben
Tre
is one of the countrysides of all Southern provinces in Vietnam. This site, visitors can go sightseeing several spectacular scenery of farms. A field there
is covered
by yellow in each harvest. It looks like
a
enormous carpet lasting to the sky leg. In additional, There are
many
birds flying on the sky, all of them set up a great picture in the afternoon. If you visited my city, I would lead you to there. You not
only
contemplate
some
views being poem,
but
also
can swim in rivers nearby. That will be wonderful experiences you have once
come
to my home town.
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IELTS essay Are there any pleasant places to relax in your home town?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
110 words
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