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Coronavirus bad and good habits

Coronavirus bad and good habits GwO6j
We have learned strategies how to protect ourselves from infectious disease washing our hands frequently, wearing a mask, keeping social distance. We also learned and improved our online communication skills by learning or using different programs like skype, zoom and teams. Bad Habits: We started spending more time in front of the TV and not exercising well due to curfews and closed gym/recreational areas.
We have learned strategies how to protect ourselves from infectious disease washing our hands
frequently
, wearing a mask, keeping social distance. We
also
learned and
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improved
our online communication
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skills
by learning or using
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different
programs like skype, zoom and teams.

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Bad
Habits: We
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started
spending more time in front of the TV and not exercising well due to curfews and closed gym/recreational areas.

IELTS essay Coronavirus bad and good habits

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
64 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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